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 kevinblahh
 
Location: STRANDED IN KPPC
Gender: Male
exploring is stupid.
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< on 2/1/2010 2:22 AM >
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willskith
  
Location: Boston, MA
Gender: Male
| |  |  | Re: i never do these
<Reply # 1 on 2/1/2010 9:52 PM >
| | | | Nice!
1. This is great. Awesome subject from one of my favorite places! It could have benefited from having the tripod lower to put the sofa in a more prominent position, or you could try cropping it to 4x5. Maybe move to the side so the furniture has some depth, too. The tones seems a tad flat, but theyre still good.
2. My favorite of the set, I really liked this when I saw it on your flickr after you posted it. The light on the horizon is awesome, and the composition is great. My only critique is that the tree and house are cut off in a distracting manner... maybe back up and pan to the right a little.
3. Also seems like it could have benefited from being a little wider. The lines are cool, but its too tight. It also looks a little crooked. These are digital, no? That orange painted metal is pretty cool, you should bump it up in post.
4. Needs to be wider, the doors are cut off on all sides, so its not very compelling to look at. Its also a bit underexposed.
5. Nice composition and lines, but its way underexposed, there are no highlights. You could easily fix it in post.
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ahhntzville
Location: Boston
| | Re: i never do these
<Reply # 2 on 2/1/2010 11:54 PM >
| | | | I like the second one a lot, but agree with Will that the frame cutting through the tree trunk being distracting.
I like the colors and some of the elements of #3, but ultimately it bores me a little. Might be a more compelling shot with some cropped off the top.
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Steed
     
Location: Edmonton/Seoul
Gender: Male
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Race Traitor
| | | Re: i never do these
<Reply # 3 on 2/9/2010 5:43 AM >
| | | | 1 looks like it belongs in a dictionary next to the definition of UE. Peeling paint and lonely chairs!
2 I agree with the others about the framing. Also I think you could do to crop the other sides tighter in some way.
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
| | Re: i never do these
<Reply # 4 on 2/10/2010 4:49 AM >
| | | | loving 1,2 and 4!
i wish #1 was a little lower of an angle though
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Sgt Marshall
Location: Paris
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| | | Re: i never do these
<Reply # 5 on 2/11/2010 12:45 PM >
| | | | 2 is a good shot mate... if it was recropped to show all of the house (as others have suggested) it would be boring.
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metawaffle
King of Puns
Location: Brisbane!
Gender: Male
Purveyor of Fine Lampshades
| | | Re: i never do these
<Reply # 6 on 2/11/2010 12:57 PM >
| | | | Posted by Sgt Marshall
2 is a good shot mate... if it was recropped to show all of the house (as others have suggested) it would be boring.
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Agreed, I like it the way it is.
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Vital Films
Location: Scarboro - Dean Park
Gender: Male
Caveman king explorer
| | | Re: i never do these
<Reply # 7 on 2/12/2010 6:52 PM >
| | | | I personally like #2 [Awesome night shot!. the clouds, house in the background and the pond in the foreground. Awesome] and #5 I like the chair in the hallway nicely placed, It makes your eyes wander around. Great work!
Cavemen were once secluded to caves. Then they were released, they were released to explore the world!
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saj1090
Location: Richmond
Gender: Male
| | Re: i never do these
<Reply # 8 on 2/26/2010 5:51 AM >
|  | | | I love number two. By far my favorite of the set. I'm a big fan of the light streaming through the broken windows.
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kevinblahh
Location: STRANDED IN KPPC
Gender: Male
exploring is stupid.
| | Re: i never do these
<Reply # 9 on 3/2/2010 6:59 AM >
| | | | Posted by saj1090
I love number two. By far my favorite of the set. I'm a big fan of the light streaming through the broken windows.
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what broken windows, thats my house
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Jeff!
Location: Boston, MA
Gender: Male
| | Re: i never do these
<Reply # 10 on 3/2/2010 12:35 PM >
| | | | 1. lighting in this is pretty good, but the chair (the main subject) is darkened compared to the rest of the photo. it takes away from it a little bit. also the composition is pointed too downward for my liking. if you dropped your tripod and leveled your lens i feel it would have made a huge different.
2. this is awesome, pretty tight comp and awesome lighting - my favorite of the set.
3. your vertical lines are off and in a shot like this they MAKE the shot. also if you stepped to your right and used that leading line better from the corner of the shot it would be much easier on the eye. exposure looks pretty good.
4. i'm sorry but this is just not good. it's pointed down, crooked and way under exposed. the colors/curves are also off.
5. nice comp, bad exposure. way under exposed and again with the lighting off on the main subject. the chair is darker than everything else and everything else is way under exposed
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