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 OHHELLOKERRY
 
Location: Long Island/buffalo, New York
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< on 10/31/2007 12:53 AM >
|  | | | hello, it's my first time posting a thread so tell me if i did something wrong and also if you could give me some good advice & tips in my photos.
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three
I'm thinking 3 need more help maybe too much negative space but i thought I'd put it on there anyway.
edit: i shot these all with canon rebel xti.
[last edit 10/31/2007 1:04 AM by OHHELLOKERRY - edited 1 times]
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Steed
       
Location: Edmonton/Seoul
Gender: Male
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Race Traitor
| |  | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 1 on 10/31/2007 1:46 AM >
| | | | The first one isn't composed right. I'd rather see the top frame of the window.
The second one is great. What is it?
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OHHELLOKERRY
Location: Long Island/buffalo, New York
| | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 2 on 10/31/2007 2:36 AM >
| | | | yeah for the first one i actually never thought of that now it's going to bother me, haha.
and the second one is a water tower.
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suicidepactphoto
Location: Western New York
Gender: Male
" Did he who made the lamb make thee? "
| |  | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 3 on 10/31/2007 2:48 AM >
| | | | The second one is a great shot. The first and the third the exposure is way off and the contrast needs work..
What are you shooting with?
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OHHELLOKERRY
Location: Long Island/buffalo, New York
| | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 4 on 10/31/2007 3:08 AM >
| | | | canon rebel xti
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JuiceBox889
Location: New Jersey
Gender: Male
| |  | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 5 on 10/31/2007 3:11 AM >
| | | | I really like the second one.
The first and third one would have been boring even if the technical stuff was done right. It's just a boring subject. As far as the technical stuff, its way blown out, the darker spots are entirely too dark, and you composed them wrong even for the effect you were going for. You cut the top of the window off in the first one, and again in the second.
Sometimes you can make windows look good as the subject of your photo, it just needs to be done right. Just keep shooting. Read as much as you can on the technical aspect of it, and keep shooting. I'm still learning a lot myself. The more you shoot, the better you get with your equipment and choosing what will look good and what won't. Good luck and get out there.
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Martino
Location: Almere - NL
Gender: Male
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| | | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 6 on 10/31/2007 10:35 AM >
| | | | 2nd is beautiful!
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zmuh11
Location: St. Louis
Gender: Male
| | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 7 on 10/31/2007 7:08 PM >
| | | | The 2nd one is out of this world, literally. I'm trying to figure out how you shot that. Is it a short water tower? Because it looks like you are very close to it?
????
But it looks awesome
The other two not so much.
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| | | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 8 on 10/31/2007 7:14 PM >
| | | | I like #3 best. a bit dark though.
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OHHELLOKERRY
Location: Long Island/buffalo, New York
| | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 10 on 11/1/2007 12:30 AM >
| | | | Posted by zmuh11
The 2nd one is out of this world, literally. I'm trying to figure out how you shot that. Is it a short water tower? Because it looks like you are very close to it?
????
But it looks awesome
The other two not so much.
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yeah it was a very short water tower. :]
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desmet
When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro.
| | | | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 11 on 11/1/2007 3:07 AM >
| | | | 1st could be OK with some correction
2nd is gorgeous maaaayybe dodge the left side a tad
3rd is boring and needs more shadow detail.
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Tom M.
Location: Long Island, NY
Gender: Male
| | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 12 on 11/3/2007 4:21 PM >
| | | | I'm not so good at critiquing but 2 is one of the better water tower shots I've seen. Is it still welded?
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OHHELLOKERRY
Location: Long Island/buffalo, New York
| | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 13 on 11/4/2007 3:53 PM >
| | | | Posted by Tom M.
Is it still welded?
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i really don't know but i know you can get up in to the top of it.
thanks for everyone's critique, ill definitely use it when i am shooting next time.
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Etownconcretex
Location: long island,NY
Gender: Male
| | | | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 14 on 11/4/2007 4:41 PM >
| | | | Posted by Tom M.
I'm not so good at critiquing but 2 is one of the better water tower shots I've seen. Is it still welded?
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i wouldnt go in there anyway if it wasnt welded. bad toxic fumes might kill u before u make it to the top lol
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
| | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 15 on 11/26/2007 11:04 PM >
| | | | i like the first one
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OHHELLOKERRY
Location: Long Island/buffalo, New York
| | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 16 on 11/26/2007 11:48 PM >
| | | | haha thank you =]
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
| | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 17 on 11/26/2007 11:55 PM >
| | | | Posted by OHHELLOKERRY
haha thank you =]
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no prob...its a good shot
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Krescentia
Location: Oklahoma
Gender: Female
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| | Re: three shots.
<Reply # 18 on 11/27/2007 5:07 PM >
| | | | I like the first, and the 3rd is pretty nice too, bit dark though..
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