 |
|
|
UER Store
|
|
order your copy of Access All Areas today!
|
|
|
 Wes
  
Location: Kansas City, MO
Gender: Male
 |  |  | Ive Got Fleas!!!
< on 10/10/2007 3:03 AM >
|  | | | There was an abundance of fleas in this old school that decided I would be their host.
Comments or critiques?
[last edit 10/10/2007 3:04 AM by Wes - edited 2 times]
|
|
MHInc
   
This member has been banned. See the banlist for more information.
Location: Niagara Falls, Ontario Canada
Gender: Male
| |  | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 1 on 10/10/2007 4:09 AM >
| | | | Great set! Thanks for sharing! I sent you a PM Wes for some advice related to one of your pics.
MH Inc. Photography Canada
http://www.mhinccanada.com
|
|
Jeff!
Location: Boston, MA
Gender: Male
| | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 2 on 10/12/2007 2:48 PM >
| | | | 1) i like alot, it has some very nice, subtle colors and the lighting is great, the composition is pretty on, maybe a step to the right to even it out and get rid of that wall might help a tad, but a really tight shot
2) the texture and lighting in this is great, this is my favorite.
3) nice use of the light and the DOF, might want to ditch some of that black on the lower left, hinders the comp a tad
4) really cool shot, again, very nice lighting. a little crop might have been nice, again.. lots of blank space.
5) a little underexposed, but it's a very tough shot with the extremes in lighting you have there
6) awesome lighting, nice composition and exposure.
7) i like this shot, a little dodging/burning in photoshop could definitely help it out though.
8) night lighting and composition, a tad underexposed though
hope this was helpful man
looks like your use of lighting is dead on, the exposures overall are very good, just a few small compositional flaws i'd say. but again just my 2 cents, so take it for what it's worth
|
|
don cornelius
 
This member has been banned. See the banlist for more information.
Location: Your asshole.
Proud Parent
| | | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 3 on 10/12/2007 2:56 PM >
| | | | great set! It's really nice to see a location not covered in graf, just good old natural decay.
40+ year olds with Myspace pages are not cool, they are pediphiles on the prowl. Buyer beware. |
|
gr8fzy1
Location: Waterbury, CT
Gender: Male
Fewer and Fewer...
| |  | | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 4 on 10/12/2007 5:46 PM >
| | | | I wanna go in there! *cries*
Softly creeping through
Empty hallways decades old,
glimpsing history. |
|
Wes
Location: Kansas City, MO
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 5 on 10/13/2007 1:08 PM >
| | | | Posted by gr8fzy1
I wanna go in there! *cries*
|
Only if you want fleas. Im not going near this place again. I came out and had hundreds of fleas climbing around my leg under my jeans.
Thank you for the nice critique.
[last edit 10/13/2007 1:09 PM by Wes - edited 1 times]
|
|
BUDSKi
Location: St Louis
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 6 on 10/13/2007 6:16 PM >
| | | | Posted by Wes
Only if you want fleas. Im not going near this place again. I came out and had hundreds of fleas climbing around my leg under my jeans.
Thank you for the nice critique.
|
flea dip? or maybe flea collar?
-BUDSKi |
|
LtotheJ
Location: CT
Gender: Male
| | | | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 7 on 10/13/2007 7:42 PM >
| | | | i had a run in with fleas once, it was very unpleasant.
|
|
Wes
Location: Kansas City, MO
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 9 on 10/16/2007 3:11 AM >
| | | | Posted by LtotheJ
i had a run in with fleas once, it was very unpleasant.
|
Certainly enough for a lifetime. Those fuckers just jump back on as soon as you get them off.
|
|
Furious D
Location: Northern Ontario
Gender: Male
The Night Time is the Right Time
| | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 10 on 10/25/2007 1:39 AM >
| | | | hahaha I got fleas exploring once to. I went into this old ass basement and they hopped in me immediately. I was able to contain myself enough to get some cool shots, and then I booked it out of there. Nice pics by the way. The composition is certainly there. One thing I'd suggest is to use a longer exposure, as some of the photos look pretty dark.
"The time of getting fame for your name on its own is over. Artwork that is only about wanting to be famous will never make you famous. Fame is a by-product of doing something else. You don't go to a restaurant and order a meal because you want to have a shit."
-Banksy
The work of FuriousD: https://www.flickr...photos/opdendries/ |
|
TheHolyBreadstick
Location: Cleveland, OH/Milford, CT
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 11 on 10/25/2007 5:55 PM >
|  | | | -I really like the DOF in the third shot.
-You captured the light well in the sixth shot.
-#7 is a cool idea, but the lack of light on the most forward subject really detracts from the image (although the light coming from behind him adds a really nice edge, but it just lacks a front fill light)
|
|
true_infinity
Location: Rockford, IL.
Gender: Male
Jerk of the Year
| |  | | | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 12 on 10/25/2007 7:55 PM >
| | | | Posted by Furious D
...they hopped in me immediately.
|
Interesting.
That must've felt...odd.
~b
Leo1: You cant just wander around Gary going into old buildings! Theres plenty of crackheads that will bust you in the mouth for that camera, then run a train your ladyfriends.
Me: I like Gary, I think its nice, aside from the lack of eats on a Sunday afternoon.
Leo2: Yeah, its really nice...until we find three dead strangers in an...abandoned...thing. |
|
Furious D
Location: Northern Ontario
Gender: Male
The Night Time is the Right Time
| | Re: Ive Got Fleas!!!
<Reply # 13 on 10/25/2007 8:40 PM >
| | | | Posted by true_infinity
Interesting.
That must've felt...odd.
~b
|
Crap. hahaha what a conveniently embarrassing typo.
"The time of getting fame for your name on its own is over. Artwork that is only about wanting to be famous will never make you famous. Fame is a by-product of doing something else. You don't go to a restaurant and order a meal because you want to have a shit."
-Banksy
The work of FuriousD: https://www.flickr...photos/opdendries/ |
|
|
|
All content and images copyright © 2002-2024 UER.CA and respective creators. Graphical Design by Crossfire.
To contact webmaster, or click to email with problems or other questions about this site:
UER CONTACT
View Terms of Service |
View Privacy Policy |
Server colocation provided by Beanfield
This page was generated for you in 156 milliseconds. Since June 23, 2002, a total of 740291018 pages have been generated.
|
|
