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styleecaviar location: Memphis, TN Gender: Male Nation of Stylee \| \| \|	Abandoned Ammunitiosn Factory < on 11/3/2006 2:21 PM >

	i will apologize in advance...this is my first time posting and i failed to read the rules...about no more than six photos, numbering them etc... i was going to remove the post and start over and then i read the part above about not removing your post with this feature...so NEXT TIME i wont post incorrectly.. [last edit 11/3/2006 2:40 PM by styleecaviar - edited 2 times] William S. Nations

ryan This member has been banned. See the banlist for more information. location: Providence RI Gender: Male F/gayz \| \| \|	Re: Abandoned Ammunitiosn Factory <Reply # 1 on 11/3/2006 3:06 PM >

	Dont worry the six photos thing and the numbering them thing arn't Rules. Just overly anal guilde lines I climb stuff! Remember! Shop smart. Shop S-Mart \http://www.myspace.com/xitstheendx

laslow

location:
Tewksbury, MA

you have quite a temper for someone who takes pictures of flowers

Re: Abandoned Ammunitiosn Factory
<Reply # 2 on 11/3/2006 3:24 PM >

Posted by styleecaviar

ES EL CHUPACABRA!
YOU FOUND EL CHUPACABRA.

OH MY GOD.

IT'S A STRIKING RESEMBLANCE.

whats left of the psych location: 200 feet under the Arctic Ocean Gender: Male \| \|	Re: Abandoned Ammunitiosn Factory <Reply # 3 on 11/3/2006 5:21 PM >

	Wow a love what you did to all of them love them all...the 8th one is my favorite nice work! If you can't beat them, shoot them! http://urbantresspasser.blogspot.com/ http://www.myartpr...xplorerTresspasser

Zokk_ location: Santa Rosa, California Gender: Male Casual Explorer \|	Re: Abandoned Ammunitiosn Factory <Reply # 4 on 11/3/2006 6:22 PM >

	Holy... I can't find anything worth noting wrong with any of the pics. Although, I'm curious how you got the blur effect on #3... Is that edited or a camera setting/ filter/ lense? Yeah, well, having your planet blown up can have that effect on a species.

lo fi location: Columbus Gender: Male \| \|	Re: Abandoned Ammunitiosn Factory <Reply # 5 on 11/3/2006 7:36 PM >

	that blur effect is not my cup of tea

hedd

location:
Ottawa, ON, CA
Gender: Male

Re: Abandoned Ammunitiosn Factory
<Reply # 6 on 11/11/2006 12:02 AM >

No me neither, looks like a messy photoshop job, really overdone for my tastes. It's cool to blur things for effect, to draw your attention to specific elements etc, but it has to leave the photo in a believable state. Blurring in the middle of a wall doesn't work.

However the, uh... let me see... one... two... ok the 11th shot is better. Stick to stuff like this - you've got a clear difference between foreground and background, and you're only blurring one of them. That works.

Most of the photos are interesting, if a tad overexposed.

I would try and "self-censor" a bit more in the future to avoid posting nearly identical shots... for example 1&2, 6&7, 3&10... unless you're specifically asking for feedback on which shot people prefer. Or use something like Autostich to create a more unique photo:

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All in all you've got some good shots there. I especially like the ones later in the series with a lot of contrast and interesting perspectives. Good work.

- BG

Brind location: Kitchener, ON Gender: Male \| \|	Re: Abandoned Ammunitiosn Factory <Reply # 7 on 11/11/2006 5:34 PM >

	Where'd all the images go? Instagram "Adventure is worthwhile in itself." -Amelia Earhart

Corporal_Clegg

location:
Baltimore, MD
Gender: Male

Re: Abandoned Ammunitiosn Factory
<Reply # 8 on 11/11/2006 5:40 PM >

Posted by Brind
Where'd all the images go?

Thats what I'd like to know.

YEAHBUTWAT

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