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Leichenwagen93
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< on 5/6/2006 7:01 PM >
|  | | | Just a few photos i took at the same industrial building tonight.I know they are not original,but do tell your thoughts on them.Thanks!
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If you likes my pics,feel free to stop by http://www.flickr....otos/48142445@N00/
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JonnyVpa
 
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Atlanta, GA and Scranton, PA (Hometown)
Gender: Male
ROTTEN FUCK!!!
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<Reply # 1 on 5/7/2006 2:28 AM >
|  | | | all in all quality is good..... the composition isnt hittin the spot.... number 1 is pretty good... i like that.... but there is potential.. i see what you were goin for ....
Are you using film if so nice job
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Glass
      
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as one does
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<Reply # 2 on 5/7/2006 2:52 AM >
| | | | I can't really tell what I'm supposed to be looking at. Maybe a clearer subject would help your composition come together.
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Leichenwagen93
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<Reply # 3 on 5/9/2006 9:23 AM >
| | | | Thanks for all your comments!
To JonnyVpa: All the photos were taken by my first P&S digicam and so far i felt pretty good with the results.If i got the money,i would definitely try out the film cam and DSLR.And I agree with you that the composition wasn't good enough to convey the message...i need to do more experiment on that.
To Glass: Yea,i think it would be better if i come up with a theme for the photos.I 'll do that if i think i am ready to post them on the UE photography thread!Right now what i want is improvement.
Here are some pics i took yesterday at the same location but this time on the roof.Feel free to leave your comments again!
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southsideshutterbug
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Pittsburgh, PA
Gender: Male
I'm just a student of American history.
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<Reply # 4 on 5/9/2006 1:02 PM >
| | | | | Here are some pics i took yesterday at the same location but this time on the roof.Feel free to leave your comments again! |
#1 and #7 are improvements over your other images. #1 is my favorite because the tower is off-center and the huge black pipe coming in from the left is such a huge visual magnet.
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nobody
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VANCOUVER B.C.
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5:55 is a state of mind
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<Reply # 5 on 5/9/2006 2:51 PM >
| | | | I like 1,2,4 of the first set and 5,6 of the second. Thanks, N.
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tippa
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boner jamz
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<Reply # 6 on 5/9/2006 7:01 PM >
| | | | black and white is good... just needs the contrast bumped up on the first set. make things jump out at the viewer.
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