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Abandoned not Forgotten
Location: Northern NJ Gender: Male
| | | | Rip me a new one! < on 2/6/2013 9:35 PM >
| | | I'm not sure what the cross-posting etiquette here is; I posted these same images in the Northeast forum but also wanted some critiques on them which is why I'm cross posting here. Hope that's okay! I'm continuing to work on my composition and would appreciate any feedback on any of the pictures. There is a link to the full set at the bottom. Thank you and all of your input is highly appreciated! 1.
Brick by Abandoned not Forgotten, on Flickr 2.
Light at the End by Abandoned not Forgotten, on Flickr 3.
Hallway by Abandoned not Forgotten, on Flickr 4.
Hold On by Abandoned not Forgotten, on Flickr 5.
Electric Chair by Abandoned not Forgotten, on Flickr 6.
Leaning by Abandoned not Forgotten, on Flickr 7.
Help by Abandoned not Forgotten, on Flickr 8.
Squares by Abandoned not Forgotten, on Flickr 9.
Soon by Abandoned not Forgotten, on Flickr 10.
Pirate Chair by Abandoned not Forgotten, on Flickr Full Set Here
Abandoned not Forgotten (Under Construction) Flickr | YouTube | Facebook Canon T4i | Tokina 11-16mm f/2.8 | Canon 50mm f/1.8 II | Manfrotto 190XPROB |
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theendof93
Location: Kings Park, NY Gender: Female
| | | Re: Rip me a new one! <Reply # 1 on 2/15/2013 3:25 PM >
| | | 9!
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j3tt1s0n
Location: dallas
| | Re: Rip me a new one! <Reply # 2 on 2/18/2013 2:03 AM >
| | | 1 and 3 are looking a tad over exposed. Are you shooting canon? 4 I like the composition but maybe a little more dof. 9 and 10 are your obligatory chair shots but I find them tasteful.
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EVmAN
Location: Mississauga, ON Gender: Male
and I-- I took the path less traveled by, And that has made all the difference.
| | Re: Rip me a new one! <Reply # 3 on 2/19/2013 1:21 AM >
| | | I'm guessing you used super low aperture for #4. I would have liked to see a bit more of that railing in focus, since it's all one object.
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DrWindyNibbles
Location: North Orange County Gender: Male
"For if you forgive others their trespasses, your heavenly Father will also forgive you"
| | | Re: Rip me a new one! <Reply # 4 on 2/21/2013 5:34 AM >
| | | I really enjoyed the punctuated bokeh in #4. It looked as if you used an app though, what lens and camera?
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Abandoned not Forgotten
Location: Northern NJ Gender: Male
| | | | Re: Rip me a new one! <Reply # 5 on 2/21/2013 3:05 PM >
| | | One of my favorites as well
Posted by j3tt1s0n 1 and 3 are looking a tad over exposed. Are you shooting canon? 4 I like the composition but maybe a little more dof. 9 and 10 are your obligatory chair shots but I find them tasteful.
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I struggled adjusting the exposure on #1 in LR. I felt like taking lowering anymore took away from the photo - but I can always revisit it. #3 I thought was fine exposure-wise, but I'll have to revisit this one as well. I wasn't sure where I was going with #4 it was pretty spontaneous, but some more DoF could definitely make it more interesting. Yes, I'm shooting Canon T4i w/ Tokina f/2.8 11-16mm. Thanks for your critique!
Posted by EVmAN I'm guessing you used super low aperture for #4. I would have liked to see a bit more of that railing in focus, since it's all one object.
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f/2.8 - I'm not sure if that would have been possible with this lens at this angle.
Posted by Ethan Alloway I really enjoyed the punctuated bokeh in #4. It looked as if you used an app though, what lens and camera?
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Nope no app or post-blurring. Canon T4i w/ Tokina f/2.8 11-16mm.
Abandoned not Forgotten (Under Construction) Flickr | YouTube | Facebook Canon T4i | Tokina 11-16mm f/2.8 | Canon 50mm f/1.8 II | Manfrotto 190XPROB |
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ghettokumquats
Location: Brea, CA Gender: Male
The Enrichment Center is required to remind you that you will be baked, and then there will be cake.
| | Re: Rip me a new one! <Reply # 6 on 2/21/2013 6:10 PM >
| | | Your composition is great in most of the pictures (especially 9!). The only thing I would suggest is taming the amount of exposure you have, as it varies widely. Digital cameras aren't very forgiving in high contrast situations, so you've got to meter closer to the highlights, or they will be blown out as in 1, 5, 8, 9, and 10. Like I said, your composition is great, so you've got the eye, you just need to work on managing light from a more technical standpoint. Great set, it looks like is was a fun explore.
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Abandoned not Forgotten
Location: Northern NJ Gender: Male
| | | | Re: Rip me a new one! <Reply # 7 on 2/25/2013 8:21 PM >
| | | Posted by ghettokumquats Your composition is great in most of the pictures (especially 9!). The only thing I would suggest is taming the amount of exposure you have, as it varies widely. Digital cameras aren't very forgiving in high contrast situations, so you've got to meter closer to the highlights, or they will be blown out as in 1, 5, 8, 9, and 10. Like I said, your composition is great, so you've got the eye, you just need to work on managing light from a more technical standpoint. Great set, it looks like is was a fun explore.
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Thank you and thanks for the advice, I'll work on my metering! It was a fun explore as always
Abandoned not Forgotten (Under Construction) Flickr | YouTube | Facebook Canon T4i | Tokina 11-16mm f/2.8 | Canon 50mm f/1.8 II | Manfrotto 190XPROB |
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Abaddon
Location: Toronto, ON Gender: Female
| | Re: Rip me a new one! <Reply # 8 on 2/25/2013 8:47 PM >
| | | Agreed! I like your lines, however in the images with objects (bowling pins) you could zoom in a bit and fill the image more with the subject. Still keeping your composition though.
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seedy
Location: Triad, North Carolina Gender: Male
Won't eat you.
| | | Re: Rip me a new one! <Reply # 9 on 2/26/2013 11:28 PM >
| | | Posted by ghettokumquats Your composition is great in most of the pictures (especially 9!). The only thing I would suggest is taming the amount of exposure you have, as it varies widely. Digital cameras aren't very forgiving in high contrast situations, so you've got to meter closer to the highlights, or they will be blown out as in 1, 5, 8, 9, and 10. Like I said, your composition is great, so you've got the eye, you just need to work on managing light from a more technical standpoint. Great set, it looks like is was a fun explore.
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Yup. ALWAYS expose for the highlights, pull the details out of the shadows in post later. There is no information to get out of a blown out highlight.
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