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 Furious D
     
Location: Northern Ontario
Gender: Male
The Night Time is the Right Time
 |  | I lay these before you to critique
< on 10/26/2007 4:38 PM >
|  | | | Just decided to post a few of my favorites.
Constructive comments please 
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"The time of getting fame for your name on its own is over. Artwork that is only about wanting to be famous will never make you famous. Fame is a by-product of doing something else. You don't go to a restaurant and order a meal because you want to have a shit."
-Banksy
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don cornelius
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Proud Parent
| |  | Re: I lay these before you to critique
<Reply # 1 on 10/26/2007 4:49 PM >
| | | | #6 is really cool.
40+ year olds with Myspace pages are not cool, they are pediphiles on the prowl. Buyer beware. |
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brandnewteeth
   
Location: Atlanta, Georgia
Gender: Male
Carry the torch that's never lit.
| | Re: I lay these before you to critique
<Reply # 2 on 10/26/2007 4:57 PM >
| | | | I dig 4.
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micro
Gender: Male
Slowly I turned
| | Re: I lay these before you to critique
<Reply # 3 on 10/26/2007 5:05 PM >
| | | | I think 4 looks really good. I would've cropped it (and brightened it up) more like this though:
[last edit 10/26/2007 5:08 PM by micro - edited 1 times]
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Furious D
Location: Northern Ontario
Gender: Male
The Night Time is the Right Time
| | Re: I lay these before you to critique
<Reply # 4 on 10/26/2007 5:16 PM >
| | | | Posted by micro
I think 4 looks really good. I would've cropped it (and brightened it up) more like this though:
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Yeah that looks better cropped. That wall is rather distracting without it. Thanks!
"The time of getting fame for your name on its own is over. Artwork that is only about wanting to be famous will never make you famous. Fame is a by-product of doing something else. You don't go to a restaurant and order a meal because you want to have a shit."
-Banksy
The work of FuriousD: https://www.flickr...photos/opdendries/ |
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desmet
When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro.
| |  | | Re: I lay these before you to critique
<Reply # 5 on 10/26/2007 6:05 PM >
| | | | 1 - Too busy...lacks a strong subject. Composition is OK but its just one of those shots that doesnt work.
2 - Good, but the thing should be facing in to the frame. That's a rule...people, cars, etc. should always face in to the frame. Thats one of the photography "rules" that I think applies almost all the time...things just don't feel right facing out...it feels unbalanced. Otherwise good though.
3 - Lacks a strong subject...kind of boring.
4 - Really great idea. There's a lot going on here that is really fantastic. Something about shooting through doors like that though...it never works for me. You're not alone...I do these all the time too. Great colors and cool composition...the door frame in the foreground just doesnt do it for me though.
5 - Nice, but would be better if the feet werent partially cut off. Bracketing and blending the window for some detail there would be cool too.
6 - This is a shot I would take, but it just....there's not enough of a focus here. It would be better zoomed in, but then you would lose the big wheel. I don't know how to tell you to make this better.
7 - Great. Somewhat minimalist and very cool. Works.
Good job. Overall I would say you are on the right track, just work on finding good interesting subjects and isolating them. Your composition skills are good and can get better.
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Furious D
Location: Northern Ontario
Gender: Male
The Night Time is the Right Time
| | Re: I lay these before you to critique
<Reply # 6 on 10/26/2007 7:14 PM >
| | | | Thanks Desmet!
"The time of getting fame for your name on its own is over. Artwork that is only about wanting to be famous will never make you famous. Fame is a by-product of doing something else. You don't go to a restaurant and order a meal because you want to have a shit."
-Banksy
The work of FuriousD: https://www.flickr...photos/opdendries/ |
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belleZ
Location: knoxville, tn
Gender: Female
free the wm3!
| |  | | | Re: I lay these before you to critique
<Reply # 7 on 10/26/2007 7:45 PM >
| | | | 1 - i don't care much for this shot, im not even sure what i should be looking at?
2 - i really like this one, i would like to see it in color.
3 - i like this one, the way the light comes through is rad
4 - My favourite of the set. The blues and greens in the different room really bring it together. Also, i like your version better than the cropped one.
5-8 - i dont care for/ have an opinion on.
“What you might see as depravity is, to me, just another aspect of the human condition.” - A.Argento |
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Martino
Location: Almere - NL
Gender: Male
2,5 days 5691 km, 1200 cigarettes, 131 beers, 67 locations, 3 girs and 2 cars! I absolutely rule!
| | | Re: I lay these before you to critique
<Reply # 8 on 10/26/2007 8:03 PM >
| | | | 4 and 6 are strong photos
http://www.flickr.com/photos/martino_ |
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