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Re: Just a few things from today < Reply # 2 on 4/27/2015 10:03 PM > | Reply with Quote
Those are unedited? Fantastic lens.
With the pictures of the girl through the window, you might try intentionally framing the window (or any object of attention) perhaps on a third intersection point or in a more dramatic part of the frame.
Re: Just a few things from today < Reply # 4 on 12/23/2015 11:35 PM > | Reply with Quote
Not a big fan of the pose in the first one. I feel like the phone disrupts her figure a bit. The second and third I would like a lot more if they were straight. In the fourth I really like how the lines of the window frames kind of appear to connect to the lines down the back of the chair. I'm not completely sold on it though. Maybe it's the centered framing? The foreground is a bit boring. I'd also have removed the trash on the bottom right. The last one I like, colors and composition are nice.