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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Oh yea (Viewed 537 times)
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Oh yea
< on 5/31/2011 2:31 AM >
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Let me know what you think. Thanks.
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Re: Oh yea
<Reply # 1 on 6/1/2011 2:45 AM >
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I like the texture in 1 and 5 is kind of interesting

im just confused how this is exploring? did you go into the house w the spray paint or something?

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Re: Oh yea
<Reply # 2 on 6/1/2011 5:36 AM >
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Posted by k8 intense
I like the texture in 1 and 5 is kind of interesting

im just confused how this is exploring? did you go into the house w the spray paint or something?


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Re: Oh yea
<Reply # 3 on 6/1/2011 5:43 AM >
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Number 5 is pretty sweet. I like bridges. If I were you though I would straighten that up a bit. It seems crooked.

The rest don't really do anything for me, but I like number 5.

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Re: Oh yea
<Reply # 4 on 6/6/2011 5:25 AM >
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Great composition of all of them. They each have their own personality and aren't doctored too much.

Number one is my definite favorite however, with the detail of the wood grain, and the unique colors.

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Re: Oh yea
<Reply # 5 on 6/6/2011 5:51 AM >
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1. Definitely your strongest. I think cropping out the unimportant stuff on the sides and centering the padlock would do it even better. Really digging the color, and capturing some more texture would make it stronger. Unfortunately, I'm still new as well and don't know how to capture texture yet.

2. Out of focus, no subject, boring.

3. Very cool reflections in the center skyscraper. Kinda looks like an Impressionist watercolor painting. Crop out all the rest of the boring stuff and focus on that.

4. It's a house, I guess.

5. This is an interesting one. Pretty strong on its own, but I think lowering the camera to the ground and pointing the angle up to really get a view of those vaults will make it better and give it a much better sense of scale.

6. Eh, nothing here.

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Re: Oh yea
<Reply # 6 on 6/6/2011 10:52 PM >
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Posted by callmejazz
Let me know what you think. Thanks.
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I think if you give me ten minutes with that padlock, I'll show you what's behind that door.

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Re: Oh yea
<Reply # 7 on 6/7/2011 12:07 AM >
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Thank you all for the feedback and advice.

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Re: Oh yea
<Reply # 8 on 6/9/2011 9:16 PM >
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i had fun with your picture.

but yeah i think it shud be cropped to get rid of that side sliver
and possibly b/w for a feel. plus i got rid of a few things and added something




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Re: Oh yea
<Reply # 9 on 6/11/2011 4:04 AM >
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Posted by Price

i had fun with your picture.

but yeah i think it shud be cropped to get rid of that side sliver
and possibly b/w for a feel. plus i got rid of a few things and added something





lol right on.

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