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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > 1850's villa / hospital / heritage sight (Viewed 497 times)
jerm IX 


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1850's villa / hospital / heritage sight
< on 5/12/2011 9:43 PM >
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This Victorian villa was built in 1857 as a two-storey summer house for the local Railway Director. Modifications were made to the house in 1867, including roof alterations and the addition of the west wing. The third floor was added in 1900, along with the Beau-arts Corinthian portico with balcony and Corinthian porch.

It wasn't until 1952, when the 95 year old building became a private hospital. 50 years later, in 2002, the hospital closed its doors. On this day in 2011...

http://jermalism.b...rook-hospital.html

i've found a happy place with my shooting but would appreciate more constructive feedback. these were some of my favorite shots from this location. what could i do better?


over a dozen birds were trapped inside, flapping, chirping, calling and smashing into windows. by jerm IX, on Flickr


going down on an 1857 villa by jerm IX, on Flickr


brookside by jerm IX, on Flickr


heritage site by jerm IX, on Flickr


no i shouldn't crop it, its fine the way it is. by jerm IX, on Flickr

http://jermalism.b...rook-hospital.html
[last edit 5/12/2011 11:45 PM by jerm IX - edited 1 times]

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Match Girl 


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Re: 1850's villa / hospital / heritage sight
<Reply # 1 on 5/12/2011 11:59 PM >
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Gorgeous shots... love that tub.

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Re: 1850's villa / hospital / heritage sight
<Reply # 2 on 5/13/2011 12:15 AM >
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I like your composition but some of these could stand to be straightened. Unless that's barrel distortion - I can't tell.

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Re: 1850's villa / hospital / heritage sight
<Reply # 3 on 5/13/2011 12:33 AM >
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Your first shot suffers from the bottom of the doorway on the left being cut off.

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Re: 1850's villa / hospital / heritage sight
<Reply # 4 on 5/13/2011 12:41 PM >
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thanks.

Posted by arntzville
Your first shot suffers from the bottom of the doorway on the left being cut off.


yep, that was as far as i could back up against the opposite wall.



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Re: 1850's villa / hospital / heritage sight
<Reply # 5 on 5/13/2011 3:19 PM >
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Posted by jerm IX
thanks.

yep, that was as far as i could back up against the opposite wall.



Wider angle lens?

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Re: 1850's villa / hospital / heritage sight
<Reply # 6 on 5/13/2011 4:39 PM >
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These are all nice. I agree with other comments made about the first shot, my eye was drawn first to what was missing rather than what was there. The confined space to work in seems to have been the issue with these, but overall, I like them.

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