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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Everyone's Favorite Six Flags (Viewed 868 times)
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Everyone's Favorite Six Flags
< on 5/3/2011 5:13 PM >
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I actually took these photos last year, but realized I never posted them. Thoughts?

1)

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2)

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Re: Everyone's Favorite Six Flags
<Reply # 1 on 5/3/2011 6:49 PM >
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Which Six Flags is this???

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Re: Everyone's Favorite Six Flags
<Reply # 2 on 5/3/2011 7:17 PM >
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I thought one and five really stood out but I'd lose the vignetting on the ones that have it. 5 is a little heavy with the magenta for me

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Re: Everyone's Favorite Six Flags
<Reply # 3 on 5/3/2011 9:16 PM >
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The composition/framing on these is kind of weak. The first one doesn't look composed at all, as if you just saw the subject and pointed your camera at it from wherever you were standing at that moment. The building on the right in the second one is distracting. The vignetting on 4 looks bad because your subject extends into it. In the last one, the top of the ride just barely crosses the top of your frame, and the gate looks weird cut off. I hope I don't sound like I'm trashing these, because they're not terrible at all; these are just the things that I think would have improved them.

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Re: Everyone's Favorite Six Flags
<Reply # 4 on 5/3/2011 11:40 PM >
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Thanks for the crits guys, yeah I think I went a little bit overboard with the vignetting on a few of them. Some of the compositions are bugging me a bit too, but a few like the one of the building were unavoidable, it was either that or a completely nasty background.

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Re: Everyone's Favorite Six Flags
<Reply # 5 on 7/7/2011 8:44 PM >
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i LOVE 5. i love how the fence is opened, like egging you to come into the abandoned 6 flags...love all of them to be honest!!

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Re: Everyone's Favorite Six Flags
<Reply # 6 on 7/7/2011 8:52 PM >
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3 and 5 are my favorites, though since this is critique I'd like the wilting fan cropper righter around the heart in 5 and 5 rotated another 3-4 degrees CCW.

1 you're standing too far back. Wide lenses are to get close!

2. the clouds are the coolest part of the picture, but a third of the frame is boring concrete... loop up and spot meter those clouds for dramatic contrast and a cool perspective

4. too far away again. also, just a tip--don't post-process shots with vignettes and toning if the composures don't work. it gives the impression of making up for in-camera mistakes later. not saying these are all that way, just this photo brings that to mind.

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Re: Everyone's Favorite Six Flags
<Reply # 7 on 7/17/2011 5:42 PM >
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Even in this condition, I'm willing to bet lunch for 4 costs at least $50 here.

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Re: Everyone's Favorite Six Flags
<Reply # 8 on 7/18/2011 3:34 PM >
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I love the 5th one, I really really do. Not only can you see the swings with the Big Easy and Mega Zeph in the background but they seem to kind of frame is drawing you in to see the beauty in the depth.

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Re: Everyone's Favorite Six Flags
<Reply # 9 on 7/22/2011 12:22 AM >
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Looks like New Orleans

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