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 AlphaCueUp
   
Location: Phoenix
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Steed
     
Location: Edmonton/Seoul
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 1 on 5/3/2011 3:43 PM >
| | | | Nice set, and I'm especially impressed by the colours you captured, usually.
The first two are my favourites because of that. The first one looks like it was a difficult place to compose the shot, and I'm taking a guess here you got lucky capturing what you did. For the second one, you could tweak it by cutting a bit off the bottom frame, maybe bringing it more into compliance with the rule of thirds.
The third one I thought was a bit of a missed chance due to the exposure. You might be able to save it by cropping the blowouts and tweaking the rest, or more ideally if you took a longer exposure of the same scene.
Similar problem for four, but fewer blowouts and worse exposure on the subject. Also, it would probably look better if the lines were straighter. You would've needed to take this picture a few steps to the left if possible.
Five lacks a subject, and is sloped way too much to the left.
Six is back to good strong colours.
Seven is kind of difficult to appreciate on a computer screen. I think I'd prefer it on the back cover of a photography book, with text written in on the upper right corner. It also looks like the focus is off
Eight definitely needs more light. Good subject, but otherwise I'm not sure you captured it correctly.
The biggest problem with nine is how it slopes slightly to the left.
Ten is a Frankenstein of UER photography cliches, but it's otherwise well taken.
Eleven is a great (self?) portrait, but the whole thing needs to be tilted a few degrees clockwise. I hadn't even noticed the guy in the vent at first, but great shot.
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AlphaCueUp
Location: Phoenix
| | | | Re: fake-name state school
<Reply # 2 on 5/3/2011 3:47 PM >
| | | | im sorry, i posted all this stuff before reading the guidlines, then i edited the post to conform to the guidlines...
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K8 Vonwolfie
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Location: ct
Gender: Female
people die right there ---->
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<Reply # 3 on 5/4/2011 1:23 AM >
| | | | yay!! monster shot came out fantastic!!! this was a great place!
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