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 jerm IX
    
Location: Somewhere, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Male
If you can't find something nice to say...say it on UER.
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< on 4/25/2011 9:21 PM >
|  | | | This recently abandoned Mental Health Services Facility is currently active with Police Emergency Response Training...
http://jermalism.b...mental-health.html
i'm quite proud of some of these shots but i know i have a lot to learn.
For example, i can't decide for the life of me which of these is a better photograph...
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tickled ivory II by jerm IX, on Flickr
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tickled ivory by jerm IX, on Flickr
here are a few that i loved, how could they be improved upon?
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DOUBLE SECURITY DOOR - PAINT ROLLER TRICK by jerm IX, on Flickr
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WOMEN (FORCIBLE ENTRY) by jerm IX, on Flickr
3
"You can't base your life on other people's expectations." - Stevie Wonder by jerm IX, on Flickr
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9.14.12 by jerm IX, on Flickr
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Location: DunkarooLand
Gender: Male
I'm the worst of the best but I'm in this race.
| | | Re: Mental Health Services
<Reply # 1 on 4/25/2011 10:34 PM >
| | | | tickled ivory II has a better composition and focal point.
But I would have shot it at a smaller aperture to get a greater DOF, f/5.6 perhaps, getting the name in focus, but leaving the background OOF.
right thread this time.
"No risk, no reward, no fun."
"Go all the way or walk away"
escensi omnis... |
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Buffalonian
 
Location: Buffalo, NY
| | Re: Mental Health Services
<Reply # 2 on 4/25/2011 10:40 PM >
| | | | Well, obviously you didn't use the double roller trick to make these pictures better! Come on dude .... !!
heh
They are at least ON exposure, metering looks good, and the white balance seems to be good. Nothing to be ashamed of.
I cream, you cream, we all cream for .. white spooge. |
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Location: DunkarooLand
Gender: Male
I'm the worst of the best but I'm in this race.
| | | Re: Mental Health Services
<Reply # 3 on 4/25/2011 10:42 PM >
| | | | 1. Prominent barrel distortion, you cropped off the door handle, needs straightening. Suggestion: bubble level & software correction.
2. I would have cropped it slightly, a few pixels off the top, a few off the bottom, Cleanup your edges.
3. Hazy magenta aberration around the window, minor selective desaturation, to correct.
4. Too cluttered, either move some of the crap out of the way or get in close and play with DOF.
"No risk, no reward, no fun."
"Go all the way or walk away"
escensi omnis... |
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