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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Shops and "Farm" (Viewed 355 times)
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Shops and "Farm"
< on 4/23/2011 1:55 AM >
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Bring it. Please, haha.

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Re: Shops and "Farm"
<Reply # 1 on 4/23/2011 5:49 AM >
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4 and 6 really do it for me. Nice!

As for the others,
2. It looks like it's hovering in indecisiveness about what the focus is. Should have gone with a couple of stops down on the aperture there so that the left side of the photo would be completely blurry. That would bring the message home.
7. Could use a lot less sky/ground. The building facade looks like it has some fine details just screaming to be seen, and I think zooming in close to show it off will make this picture much stronger.

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Re: Shops and "Farm"
<Reply # 2 on 4/23/2011 2:33 PM >
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2 and 4 are awesome. The colors in 2 seem just a bit...off, though? Like there is some neon hints that don't look like they belong.

I agree that the last one could be good with a closer crop so we could see some details of the building.

EDIT: For example, you could crop off both sides of 7, and bring the edges close to those long things jutting out from the front. That'd make some nice leading lines to bring the eye in to the building. The steeple thing off in the distance is distracting and not necessary for the shot. Or shop out the steeple entirely so you can keep the barrels in the shot.
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Re: Shops and "Farm"
<Reply # 3 on 4/23/2011 3:19 PM >
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I like 2 just how it is but agree 7 might look better if the crop was closer to bring out the detail in the building. You can see that it's there, it just doesn't really draw your eye.
nice set

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