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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Arch Window (Viewed 999 times) gneithamer1  Location: Boston, MA Gender: Male  |  Arch Window < on 3/14/2011 5:32 AM >   Shooting with a Nikon D3100 [last edit 3/14/2011 6:34 AM by gneithamer1 - edited 2 times] Relocate  Location: nunyabiz Gender: Male  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 1 on 3/14/2011 6:28 AM >   Love this! The bucket on the ground seals the deal for me...good stuff To fail in what you've yet to achieve is more the spirit of exploration than to make no attempt at all. -Neil deGrasse Tyson robtastic  Location: central colorado Gender: Male Friends don't let friends HDR  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 2 on 3/15/2011 2:00 AM >   looks like its sloping to the left for me. My Flickr: http://www.flickr....enericprofilename/ Ram23  Location: Cincinnati, OH and/or Queens, NY Gender: Male  |  |  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 3 on 3/17/2011 4:35 AM >   Agreed with above. Maybe rotate it a bit, and run it through the lens correction tool in Photoshop if you have it. Cincinnati UE Photos: http://zfein.com/photography Price  Location: Houston,TX Gender: Male Urbex: Keeping record of things most people have forgotten.  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 4 on 3/17/2011 7:55 PM >   Photoshop >Filters >Lens Correction >??? >Profit ...actually just....yeah ...f*cking profit i like this pic alot “It still amazes me how many millions goes to discovering another star in the galaxies when, for all we know, we are still sitting on top of another undiscovered world beneath our feet.” -Martin Dansky (1952) ensimismada  Location: CA Gender: Female ...wishing I had time for one more photo...  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 5 on 3/18/2011 3:10 AM >   Posted by Relocate Love this! The bucket on the ground seals the deal for me...good stuff +1 atomx  Location: Brighton, ON Gender: Male  |  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 6 on 4/7/2011 2:36 PM >   Posted by Price Photoshop >Filters >Lens Correction >??? >Profit ...actually just....yeah ...f*cking profit i like this pic alot and a bit of cropped rotation "Programming today is a race between software engineers striving to build bigger and better idiot-proof programs, and the Universe trying to produce bigger and better idiots. So far, the Universe is winning." - Richard Cook jerm IX  Location: Somewhere, Ontario, Canada Gender: Male If you can't find something nice to say...say it on UER.  |  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 7 on 4/8/2011 1:24 PM >   all of those tweek tips are on point, but the shot is dope. http://myabandonmentissues.blogspot.ca/ inviolate_light  Location: toronto Gender: Male  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 8 on 4/9/2011 1:46 AM >   Posted by atomx and a bit of cropped rotation Agreed. Tighten up and lose the windows on edge of frame, since they are half gone already. Glass  Location: Chicago as one does  |  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 9 on 4/9/2011 4:18 PM >   I think it would be a stronger composition if it didn't have the two half-windows on the sides. Since the focus of the photo is naturally on the light features, the windows distract the eye. You can fix this by cropping them out or using a vignette feature to dim the edges a little and bring those bright features into prominence. gneithamer1  Location: Boston, MA Gender: Male  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 10 on 4/14/2011 11:44 PM >   Thanks everyone for the feedback! I have two updated versions. One cropped, and one with a vignette added. Also they've been rotated a bit. Tell me which one you think is better. 1. 2. [last edit 4/14/2011 11:46 PM by gneithamer1 - edited 1 times] Relocate  Location: nunyabiz Gender: Male  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 11 on 4/15/2011 5:39 AM >   You need to feather the edge of that vignette! It still isn't straight either... what program are you using? Don't get me wrong, its still a good shot! To fail in what you've yet to achieve is more the spirit of exploration than to make no attempt at all. -Neil deGrasse Tyson Price  Location: Houston,TX Gender: Male Urbex: Keeping record of things most people have forgotten.  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 12 on 4/15/2011 6:05 AM >   i sharpened, cropped , rotated , content filled , high passed dual layered, various burns and dodges, an orange yellow photo filter. and some shadows and highlights. and a vignette you cant really see. also a lens correction. i was bored. hope i was allowed to do this lol i LOVE your pic. 1. “It still amazes me how many millions goes to discovering another star in the galaxies when, for all we know, we are still sitting on top of another undiscovered world beneath our feet.” -Martin Dansky (1952) Relocate  Location: nunyabiz Gender: Male  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 13 on 4/15/2011 6:40 AM >   nice. To fail in what you've yet to achieve is more the spirit of exploration than to make no attempt at all. -Neil deGrasse Tyson Archer  Location: Toronto, ON Gender: Male Imperator Sagittario  |  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 14 on 4/18/2011 3:05 AM >   Posted by inviolate_light Agreed. Tighten up and lose the windows on edge of frame, since they are half gone already. I disagree with this - by tightening up the shot, you lose some of the depth perception that the windows help give the shot, IMO. Abandoned UE - http://www.abandonedue.com "We live in a twilight world... and there are no friends at dusk." shotgun mario  Location: MSP Gender: Male MSP Elite™ Card-Carrying Member  |  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 15 on 4/18/2011 6:07 AM >   photoshop perspective, distort and crop are your friends, and rules and guidelines make cleanup easy! I have to agree that the windows on the side help fill out the space a bit more. Problem is that if you're going to do rotation and/or perspective cleanup afterward, you can assume you're going to lose data on the sides (such as how I had to forfeit some pixels of the side windows on your shot). So whenever I feel like I'm going to be doing post on a particular photo, I tend to try to have 5-10 percent more FOV than I want, so that when I crop I don't have to sacrifice information for nice cleanup. If you want to protect the locations you love to explore, don't talk about them online in public! If you want to make exploring friends, send people private messages! Meet up in real life! Get off the internet! Don't try to have a UER e-penis! You won't impress anyone! This especially means you, Minneapolis MN newbies! Buffalonian  Location: Buffalo, NY  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 16 on 4/19/2011 1:01 PM >   Since everything I WAS going to say was already said .. I think you just need crazy dudes in gas masks looking through the windows with a few shirt-less tatt'd up models wander around in tight pleather. That'd been awesome! Seriously though for a 1-off post, think you did well sir! I cream, you cream, we all cream for .. white spooge. atomx  Location: Brighton, ON Gender: Male  |  |  Re: Arch Window <Reply # 17 on 4/30/2011 7:11 PM >   Don't forget about the raptors driving some tricycles. j/k, the last edit in here is good. "Programming today is a race between software engineers striving to build bigger and better idiot-proof programs, and the Universe trying to produce bigger and better idiots. So far, the Universe is winning." - Richard Cook UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Arch Window (Viewed 999 times) All content and images copyright © 2002-2024 UER.CA and respective creators. Graphical Design by Crossfire. 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