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 Boogie
  
Location: Torotno, Ontario
 |  | My First UE pictures please comment/suggest ideas.
< on 9/11/2010 4:27 AM >
|  | | | Hey guys, These are a few of my first pictures i've taken while UE. I'm new to photography and would love to get some feedback on my work and how to improve it.
Please feel free to comment on my pics. All feedback is greatly appreciated. I'm Shooting with a Nikon D3000 with a kit lens (18-55mm).
If anybody has any techniques to improve my images or has any suggestions. Please let me know.
-Evan
[last edit 9/11/2010 3:50 PM by Boogie - edited 1 times]
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WEKurtz
    
Location: Western MA
Gender: Male
| | Re: First UE pictures
<Reply # 1 on 9/11/2010 9:46 AM >
| | | | I'm no expert but this looks like some pretty good stuff. My thoughts:
#1 This is the most visually interesting shot. The eye is drawn to the door, which is just off-center enough.
#3. You've cut off part of your subject at the bottom.
#4. I like the composition in this one.
You might try not to shoot from the same stand-up angle as much, try variations.
and keep posting!
................Kurtz
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Boogie
Location: Torotno, Ontario
| | Re: First UE pictures
<Reply # 2 on 9/11/2010 11:51 AM >
| | | | Posted by WEKurtz
I'm no expert but this looks like some pretty good stuff. My thoughts:
#1 This is the most visually interesting shot. The eye is drawn to the door, which is just off-center enough.
#3. You've cut off part of your subject at the bottom.
#4. I like the composition in this one.
You might try not to shoot from the same stand-up angle as much, try variations.
and keep posting!
................Kurtz
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Thanks :) i appreciate the tips and that you like them.
A Bingo Ball in an abandoned Nursing Home.
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Avius
Location: Washington DC / NOVA
Gender: Male
Wow you guys!
| |  | Re: My First UE pictures please comment/suggest ideas.
<Reply # 3 on 9/11/2010 4:22 PM >
| | | | #1 - Nice shot, I like the blue lighting. I think it's a little overexposed, though. Did you have a tripod? I've found that's the only way to get everything you can out of a low-light situation like that.
#2 - I like the lighting here, too, but not so much the dark bars on either side (door frame?) I would have taken another step or two into the room.
#3 - You need to zoom in on that stuff in the lower right. The vast expanse of peeling paint above and to the left makes the shot less interesting.
#4 - Really nice shot. Again, though, I think it's a bit overexposed, and I see a little camera shake- a tripod would have helped you achieve a crisp shot at a lower exposure.
#5 - Interesting subject, and I like the depth of field. I would have panned right a bit more, though. I think there's a little too much emptiness along the left edge, and in un-balances the image.
Bingo Ball - interesting subject, and I like the lighting and exposure. I would have zoomed in a bit more, and let the ball be lower and to one side. Or, if you wanted it to be smack in the middle, zoom in a lot more.
In places forgotten, tread where you will. -=- http://www.flickr.com/photos/avius/ |
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Boogie
Location: Torotno, Ontario
| | Re: My First UE pictures please comment/suggest ideas.
<Reply # 4 on 9/19/2010 7:36 PM >
| | | | Thanks, I'll keep all these in mind 
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don_corleyone
 
Location: F/RoX
Gender: Male
I have abandonment issues
| | Re: My First UE pictures please comment/suggest ideas.
<Reply # 5 on 9/19/2010 9:41 PM >
| | | | huge tip: host your photos elsewhere and post them here using the IMG tags.
leave the gun. take the cannoli.
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cdevon
Location: west county
Gender: Male
| | | Re: My First UE pictures please comment/suggest ideas.
<Reply # 6 on 9/20/2010 4:51 PM >
| | | | Posted by don_corleyone
huge tip: host your photos elsewhere and post them here using the IMG tags.
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+1
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