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 wopke
 
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< on 8/7/2010 4:44 PM >
|  | | | I'm not convinced. I feel somethings missing but have no idea what. Please help me on it. Bad composition? Boring subject? I dunno..
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dsankt
 
Location: live and in the fresh
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<Reply # 1 on 8/7/2010 8:02 PM >
| | | | A tunnel of some kind would help ;)
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injektilo
   
Location: The Northeast
Gender: Male
Ride or Die
| | | | Re: Is this a good picture?
<Reply # 2 on 8/7/2010 10:22 PM >
| | | | The perspective is too extreme, it doesn't draw me in at all.
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inkblot
 
Location: Toronto
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<Reply # 3 on 8/8/2010 1:26 AM >
| | | | If the building were less prominent (maybe less saturated?), you might make a good case for positive/negative space between it and the clouds. The building itself also has some interesting shapes you could play around with and emphasize (depending on how much you'd want to change).
As it is though, I agree, the building dominates too much of this pic from this angle. I'd almost want to see a little bit of distortion on the building from such a close up angle to help push the point that the building's made up of wacky shapes.
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wopke
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 4 on 8/8/2010 9:05 AM >
| | | | thanks guys
dsankt: Been a while since I went in those. 
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Porcelain Doll
 
Location: philadelphia
Gender: Female
Who Cooks For You?
| | | Re: Is this a good picture?
<Reply # 5 on 8/10/2010 9:57 PM >
| | | | it has potential to be a good shot. shooting it at different time of day, like late afternoon during "golden hour" i think would give a better feel and lighting.
What bother me is the glare and the blowout on the glass, and i wish the building was shot more evenly symmetrical. I totally dig the extreme angle, though.
it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring.
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PositivePressure
Location: High and low where most don't go
Gender: Male
Set your Tesla coil to broil
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<Reply # 6 on 8/10/2010 10:18 PM >
| | | | I think its pretty cool. The biggest thing bothering me, however, is the positioning of the building within the frame. I think you've cropped it too far to the right... There is far more of the right bottom corner cut off than there is on the left, and that slight patch of brick at the left corner amidst the glass is distracting. I would have liked to have seen it evenly balanced.
Otherwise, its a neat subject. I like the color a lot.
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ensimismada
Location: CA
Gender: Female
...wishing I had time for one more photo...
| | Re: Is this a good picture?
<Reply # 7 on 8/11/2010 2:27 AM >
| | | | Could have used a polarizing filter to bring out the blues in that bright sky. That would have cut the glare though...
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wopke
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 8 on 8/12/2010 6:25 PM >
| | | | Posted by ensimismada
Could have used a polarizing filter to bring out the blues in that bright sky. That would have cut the glare though...
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true. I dont have one yet for this lens.
@ positivepressure: I didnt crop it. I think I was simply standing on the wrong spot. I'll see if I can take another, evenly extreme angle, but better composed. I took this one in a hast while walking by.
thnx for comments! Other pic will follow.
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