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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Brick vaulted ceiling and light painting (Viewed 383 times)
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Brick vaulted ceiling and light painting
< on 5/2/2010 6:37 PM >
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An interesting series of vaulted ceiling in an old factory.




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Re: Brick vaulted ceiling and light painting
<Reply # 1 on 5/3/2010 4:23 PM >
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cool shot, but i feel the composition is slightly off. take a step or two to the right maybe get closer to the floor if you can.

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Re: Brick vaulted ceiling and light painting
<Reply # 2 on 5/3/2010 5:17 PM >
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Yeah, cool shot, and great concept!

The elements in the shot are so symmetrical, I would play up the symmetry more- get it nice and vertical (though not necessarily centered). That's just my humble opinion, though.

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Re: Brick vaulted ceiling and light painting
<Reply # 3 on 5/3/2010 9:17 PM >
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Thanks secretdestroyers and Avius,

I'll be going back next weekend to take some more pictures, re-taking that one really straight is the first thing I'm going to do.



Unfortunately, my tripod was a little off center.

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Re: Brick vaulted ceiling and light painting
<Reply # 4 on 5/3/2010 10:23 PM >
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Is that the same one, just re-cropped? It's exactly what I was thinking; Very nice.

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Re: Brick vaulted ceiling and light painting
<Reply # 5 on 5/3/2010 11:05 PM >
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Avius, unfortunately, it's only a re-crop. I will return this weekend and this time I'll take the time to properly center my tripod and take 3 steps back to completely include the top point of the first arc.

Very wide angles lens (10mm) are not forgiving misalignment, I cannot have the arches straight and the floor leveled.

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Re: Brick vaulted ceiling and light painting
<Reply # 6 on 5/4/2010 8:32 PM >
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Beautiful! Great job too. Interesting how you chose to highlight the edges of the arks with the light. Keep it up!

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