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 breakTHEsilence
  
Location: Chicago
Gender: Male
Oh, the excitment!
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< on 2/10/2010 4:30 PM >
|  | | | I recently started with photography. I'm still new at this. Any criticism or tips would be great! Used a Nikon D3000, no Photoshop or editing.
1. Locked Doors
2. Empty Shells
3. Rusted Dreams
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insanedArk
    
Location: GTA
Gender: Male
| | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 1 on 2/10/2010 9:02 PM >
| | | | Nice shallow depth of field in all of these shots. I like the second shot but the box on the right side I find distracting because it's cut off. I'd either include it fully in the shot or just leave it out.
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zero5four
Location: Southwest Florida
Gender: Male
| |  | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 2 on 2/10/2010 9:24 PM >
| | | | Looking good man!
gotta get in, before its gone forever |
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femaledragonx
  
Location: Detroit & Everywhere Else I can dream up to go to
The singularity is near
| | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 3 on 2/10/2010 11:47 PM >
| | | | awesome. i might have included a few extra inches in different directions in your field, but i really really like what you did and the choices you made in these photos. i'd love to see you do more like this.
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msgsudz
Location: Peterborough, Ontario
Gender: Male
Msgsudz has an overactive bowel and shits like a Clydesdale.
| | | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 4 on 2/11/2010 3:07 AM >
| | | | this is a great start, and i think with more shooting and just adjusting your compositions, you could get some great results. i quite like the bullets shot, and just the box being the detractor. you have nice crispness and colour in the shots, and kudos on that without photoshopping.
keep it up!
"She's built like a steakhouse, but handles like a bistro!" - Zapp Brannigan
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gr8fzy1
Location: Waterbury, CT
Gender: Male
Fewer and Fewer...
| |  | | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 5 on 2/13/2010 5:45 PM >
| | | | Odd combination of shells: 18 gauge and .22's? Guns for the man and the little lady?
Softly creeping through
Empty hallways decades old,
glimpsing history. |
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Explorer H
 
Obla-di-obla-doberator
Location: Around the corner from the Turkey Hill
Gender: Male
I just want some slack.
| | | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 6 on 2/13/2010 6:24 PM >
| | | | Posted by gr8fzy1
Odd combination of shells: 18 gauge and .22's? Guns for the man and the little lady?
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Those are primers, probably from those empties. A reloader.
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breakTHEsilence
Location: Chicago
Gender: Male
Oh, the excitment!
| | | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 7 on 2/13/2010 9:05 PM >
| | | | Thanks for the comments!
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saj1090
Location: Richmond
Gender: Male
| | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 8 on 2/26/2010 5:48 AM >
|  | | | Posted by insanedArk
Nice shallow depth of field in all of these shots. I like the second shot but the box on the right side I find distracting because it's cut off. I'd either include it fully in the shot or just leave it out.
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I think it is distracting, but almost in a good way. Without it, the picture would be boring. I'd actually include an inch or two more.
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Nabeel_co
Location: Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 9 on 2/26/2010 8:49 AM >
| | | | Posted by insanedArk
Nice shallow depth of field in all of these shots. I like the second shot but the box on the right side I find distracting because it's cut off. I'd either include it fully in the shot or just leave it out.
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Personally I (respectfully) disagree, I like the composition of that photo, and don't find the box distracting at all, It just adds to the ambience of the photo.
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kevinblahh
Location: STRANDED IN KPPC
Gender: Male
exploring is stupid.
| | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 10 on 3/5/2010 6:30 PM >
| | | | depth of field works well with the first two, not feeling the third.
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IamtheSudden
Location: Boston and New Hampshire
Gender: Female
| | | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 11 on 3/17/2010 2:22 AM >
| | | | I love how you played with the depth of field in these. Awesome job, I don't know how I would critique these except to say keep on taking pics and experimenting with all the settings on the camera, cause there are so many things you can do and discover. Nice work!! I can't wait to see more.
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BrickMan
Location: NorthEast-England
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 12 on 3/17/2010 10:13 AM >
| | | | 1) pretty much spot on, maybe if you included all off the door lock?
2) as others, sweet, but add more cartridge box
3) dof way too shallow, either give it more F's to get maybe 2-3 nails in focus, or rotate camera right to get the beam running diagonally into the shot?
Go.. IN.. turbines...
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breakTHEsilence
Location: Chicago
Gender: Male
Oh, the excitment!
| | | Re: Abandoned House and Barn
<Reply # 13 on 3/24/2010 1:22 AM >
| | | | Thanks guys, really appreciate the comments.
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