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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > 5 pictures from some recent trips (Viewed 370 times) budda  Location: Cincinnati Gender: Male I love it when you call me Big Poppa  |  |  5 pictures from some recent trips < on 1/26/2010 8:45 PM >   All of these were shot with a Nikon D40X with the stock 18-55 mm lens, Iso 400 1. F 4.5 1/10s 2. F 9, 5s 3. F 5.6, 1/30s 4. F11, 15s 5. F 20, 30s Awesome Music Why couldn't you put the bunny back in the box? - Nicholas Cage iThink  Location: Indianapolis, IN Gender: Male From up here the city lights burn like a thousand miles of fire.  |  |  Re: 5 pictures from some recent trips <Reply # 1 on 1/26/2010 10:59 PM >   Need to work on your composition a little more. I'm not really sure what the viewer is supposed to see in #4 http://www.subordinateobject.com/ <-----> http://www.flickr.com/photos/ithink_/ Sgt Marshall  Location: Paris uer.ca/b...  |  |  Re: 5 pictures from some recent trips <Reply # 2 on 1/27/2010 9:59 AM >   The composition and the subject matter are terrible, other than that they are fine. So two things... - Find better subject matter - Research the 'rule of thirds', that will be a good start. Keep at it, you will develop an eye for it with practice. http://pridian.net I'm not here to break it, just to see how far it bends. Maglyte   |  Re: 5 pictures from some recent trips <Reply # 3 on 1/27/2010 2:23 PM >   looking at 2 I like what you are doing there may want to use layers to bring out the shadows a little more, interesting. The last one is simple and well done, but 2 I like the mood you are after!! mmmm. mandias....... budda  Location: Cincinnati Gender: Male I love it when you call me Big Poppa  |  |  Re: 5 pictures from some recent trips <Reply # 4 on 1/27/2010 6:34 PM >   I really liked 2 too. I think it could have benefited from a longer exposure, but overall I'm quite satisfied with it. As a whole though I'm disappointed by the quality of my work in residential areas. While shooting 2-4 there are alot of pictures that I feel were composed better but they didn't turn out well (too much camera shake, not enough light, etc) I'm better shooting in factories and whatnot. I agree I need alot more practice. I've only been at this for a year. Here's a couple I think are composed better. 6. 7. 8 Awesome Music Why couldn't you put the bunny back in the box? - Nicholas Cage Maglyte   |  Re: 5 pictures from some recent trips <Reply # 5 on 1/28/2010 4:12 AM >   agreed three is good and you have some basics down , the subject eh, this is a tough crowd , but you are on the right track mmmm. mandias....... UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > 5 pictures from some recent trips (Viewed 370 times) All content and images copyright © 2002-2024 UER.CA and respective creators. Graphical Design by Crossfire. To contact webmaster, or click to email with problems or other questions about this site: UER CONTACT View Terms of Service | View Privacy Policy | Server colocation provided by Beanfield This page was generated for you in 109 milliseconds. Since June 23, 2002, a total of 739875668 pages have been generated.