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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > First critique (Viewed 554 times)
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First critique
< on 1/18/2010 5:15 PM >
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So i picked a few shots I love. I'm into Macro images and small details.
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Re: First critique
<Reply # 1 on 1/19/2010 12:18 AM >
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The first two are decent but definitely not UE photos. We have a non-UE photo critiques board actually.

The third looks like a good subject. What you need to do though is make the vertical lines more straight. Also you should not have the corner in the exact center, unless you make the image perfectly symmetrical. You can improve it by cropping.

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Re: First critique
<Reply # 2 on 1/19/2010 6:06 AM >
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the first two i believe are UE related, the first is a macro of floor moss. :3 and the second is a vine that grew up a brick wall on an abandonment

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Re: First critique
<Reply # 3 on 1/19/2010 6:12 AM >
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Posted by victoria-
the first two i believe are UE related, the first is a macro of floor moss. :3 and the second is a vine that grew up a brick wall on an abandonment


Okay, you got me there. I just couldn't see any sort of decay in them, but that's hardly a prerequisite.

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Re: First critique
<Reply # 4 on 1/19/2010 1:54 PM >
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thanks, my camera was on the fritz when i took these.

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Re: First critique
<Reply # 5 on 1/19/2010 8:18 PM >
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#1 is definitely my favorite out of these.

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Re: First critique
<Reply # 6 on 1/25/2010 9:34 PM >
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I think the first shot could use a bit of sharpening unless oyu wanted a softer look. Try filter>sharpen>unsharp mask in photoshop.

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Re: First critique
<Reply # 7 on 1/29/2010 2:45 AM >
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I love moss, and a macro of moss is even better! Love #1 to death!

Are those wall tiles? They look almost like a pressed tin ceiling.

#2 doesn't do anything for me though...

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Re: First critique
<Reply # 8 on 1/31/2010 12:09 AM >
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maybe closeups would not call these macros, what lens you sporting?

mmmm. mandias.......
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Re: First critique
<Reply # 9 on 2/1/2010 8:04 PM >
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it had tin all over the walls. i wish i could remember what camera i was using at the time. its an old nikon when digital cameras first came out decent camera but it was on its way out when i took these.

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