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 FlameNeoG
Location: Northeast Ohio
Gender: Male
 |  | Lubecon Warehouse
< on 12/29/2009 4:02 AM >
|  | | | Posted the full set in UE photography, but looking for some opinions on these ones in particular. Found this place buried way back in the woods in my town. Really small, but a gem in my eyes. All shot with a Nikon D40 + Kit 18-55mm lens.
If I'm not supposed to post in both forums just let me know and I'll remove the images.
"Just some flesh caught in this big broken machine" |
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puravida9539
 
Location: Dallas Area
Gender: Male
Just give me a flashlight
| | Re: Lubecon Warehouse
<Reply # 1 on 12/29/2009 6:24 AM >
| | | | Nice pics. I really like number 2. Maybe next time you could off-center the subject instead of having them directly in the center. Overall I liked them though.
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Steed
       
Location: Edmonton/Seoul
Gender: Male
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Race Traitor
| |  | Re: Lubecon Warehouse
<Reply # 2 on 12/29/2009 8:22 AM >
| | | | I really like 2 and the colours in 3. Off-centering would be advisable in 1, 4, and 5. You should also work on getting the lines straighter. I think that would've made 2 a better photo. Also I think the focus is kind of weak in some of these, particularly 3.
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FlameNeoG
Location: Northeast Ohio
Gender: Male
| | Re: Lubecon Warehouse
<Reply # 3 on 12/29/2009 10:18 PM >
| | | | Thanks for the crit guys. I'll try off centering next time. May be going out tonight for my last explore of the year If we can think of somewhere to go.
"Just some flesh caught in this big broken machine" |
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ahhntzville
Location: Boston
| | Re: Lubecon Warehouse
<Reply # 4 on 12/29/2009 11:50 PM >
| | | | They seem rushed. Take your time and think about how you're composing the shots, or whether they will be interesting. Pay attention to getting the lines straight, and to what is being cropped out or nearly so. The wheels in 2 are too close to the bottom of the frame, and the door being cut off in the second to last one kills it.
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puravida9539
Location: Dallas Area
Gender: Male
Just give me a flashlight
| | Re: Lubecon Warehouse
<Reply # 5 on 12/30/2009 3:31 AM >
| | | | Remember the rule of thirds and it will help
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FlameNeoG
Location: Northeast Ohio
Gender: Male
| | Re: Lubecon Warehouse
<Reply # 6 on 12/30/2009 4:19 AM >
| | | | Thanks. Once I find some new locations I'll attempt to take some better pictures 
"Just some flesh caught in this big broken machine" |
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AggiePhil
Location: College Station, TX
Gender: Male
Texas Aggie
| |  | | Re: Lubecon Warehouse
<Reply # 7 on 12/30/2009 4:53 AM >
| | | | Would it have been a no-no to have removed the water bottle from the last scene before shooting it? I mean...I know that that YOU would have known it was an altered scene. But...no one else would have.  J/K...good shots man.
[last edit 12/30/2009 4:54 AM by AggiePhil - edited 1 times]
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gr8fzy1
Location: Waterbury, CT
Gender: Male
Fewer and Fewer...
| |  | | Re: Lubecon Warehouse
<Reply # 8 on 1/8/2010 4:38 AM >
| | | | Very nice! I wouldn't mind having a place like that near me. Is that ceiling in #3 made of concrete tubes?
Softly creeping through
Empty hallways decades old,
glimpsing history. |
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