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 terapr0
      
Location: Sauga City
Gender: Male
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< on 11/16/2009 9:41 PM >
|  | | | Here are a few more shots thats Im interested in getting some feedback on. Most are recent, but the shot of hearn is over a yr old now. Even though its an older shot, its still one of my favorites for some reason.
#1
#2
#3
#4
#5
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Lingerer_of_Silence
Location: London, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Male
| | Re: 3rd photo critique
<Reply # 1 on 11/17/2009 3:39 AM >
| | | | Beautiful, love them all. Flawless in my eyes! 10/10, tones, levels, DOF, everything.. Just spectacular.
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Sgt Marshall
Location: Paris
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| | | Re: 3rd photo critique
<Reply # 3 on 11/17/2009 12:51 PM >
| | | | I like the foreground you got in shot one, but the plain space on the roof is a bit distracting. The photo also seems a bit cut up into sections. I might have shot from the left side of the falls and tried to frame it a bit further to the bottom right (cut out the roof and left 'window') so the waterfall would lead you eye around the shot a bit better. But I like the shot overall, I'm just being picky.
The colours in the Hearn shot have been cranked up too much and it looks like you resorted to HDR... Noooooooo!!!!!! There is a bit of distortion in it as well that you might be able to fix. It is a hard place to shoot, personally I think is is a good shot to have taken for yourself but from an art point of view it is not strong.
Three is great, congrats. Nice and sharp, interesting colors, well framed. Maybe slightly top heavy, but I can't really offer any solutions.
Four. Nice, good exposure, not much to say.
Jon_doe inspired?  No bad, but you should not have been holding the camera. I would have aimed at getting a clean human shadow on the wall. It would have much more impact that way.
Marshall
[last edit 11/17/2009 12:55 PM by Sgt Marshall - edited 1 times]
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olive
Location: hamilton
Gender: Female
good plan, poorly executed.
| | | Re: 3rd photo critique
<Reply # 4 on 11/19/2009 10:07 PM >
| | | | Posted by terapr0
Here are a few more shots thats Im interested in getting some feedback on. Most are recent, but the shot of hearn is over a yr old now. Even though its an older shot, its still one of my favorites for some reason.
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I love #4. the shadow is so cool, and i like how it draws your eye down around the tunnel to where you're standing.
Sorry, what was that you were saying about forever alone? |
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gutterbabies
 
Location: Iowa
"Who takes a lawn chair urban exploring?"
| | | Re: 3rd photo critique
<Reply # 5 on 12/8/2009 2:26 PM >
| | | | The first is my absolute favorite. The only real flaw I see in it is that there is so much going on, you don't really know what to look at.
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yokes
Location: Toronto
Gender: Male
I aim to misbehave
| |  | | Re: 3rd photo critique
<Reply # 6 on 12/8/2009 3:04 PM >
| | | | 1 Seems soft. Maybe get some sharpening action on it. Also, would be better without you and the sparks in it.
2 Looks like a clown threw up on it. Composition-wise it is fine, though doesn't really do much for me for some reason. Also, what's that black line in the bottom right?
3 and 5 are the best of the series, I think. 4 is ok, but not something that grabs me.
"Great architecture has only two natural enemies: water and stupid men." - Richard Nickel |
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terapr0
Location: Sauga City
Gender: Male
www . tohellandback . net
| | | Re: 3rd photo critique
<Reply # 7 on 12/8/2009 4:05 PM >
| | | | Thanks for the comments guys 
Posted by yokes
2 Looks like a clown threw up on it. Composition-wise it is fine, though doesn't really do much for me for some reason. Also, what's that black line in the bottom right?
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lol. Yea I think Im just personally biased towards liking that picture because it was from the first place I ever explored, and it seems more magical to me than it would most other people.
The black line is a wire or something that was hanging in the foreground. I was able to crop some out, but didnt cut it all away because I wouldve lost too much for my liking.
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DJ Craig
Moderator
Location: Johnson City, TN
Gender: Male
Break the Silence
| | | | Re: 3rd photo critique
<Reply # 8 on 12/10/2009 6:58 AM >
| | | | Your drain photography is amazing! Shooting drains that well isn't easy.
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go..." -Dr. Suess |
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Explorer H
 
Obla-di-obla-doberator
Location: Around the corner from the Turkey Hill
Gender: Male
I just want some slack.
| | | Re: 3rd photo critique
<Reply # 9 on 12/10/2009 11:14 PM >
| | | | Posted by DJ Craig
Your drain photography is amazing! Shooting drains that well isn't easy.
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I'll echo this.
You need the right equipment, patience, and some creative juice running down your leg, all of which you prove to possess. Nice work.
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