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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > The Girls Of Summer (Viewed 1081 times)
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The Girls Of Summer
< on 4/28/2009 6:53 PM >
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A Collection of Shots from Fall till now looking for Feedback.

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Thanks for looking and looking forward to some feedback.

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 1 on 4/28/2009 7:08 PM >
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Four images stood out for me.

1. Focus is very clear, the tricycle, however shorted the depth of field (open the aperture) to place the background out of focus, to even more bring the tricycle into the foreground.

3. Excellent use of Black and White!

6. Good start, I'd crop out the right area so that only the wall, sign, and door are showing.

8. I feel this should be in colour.

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 2 on 4/28/2009 7:11 PM >
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Interestingly, I think 8 works very well in B&W. Be interesting perhaps to see it desaturated 'almost' to B&W.

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 3 on 4/28/2009 7:34 PM >
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What are you shooting with? There seems to be a lot of barrel distortion in a few of these. You can fix it pretty easy in photoshop.

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 4 on 4/28/2009 7:41 PM >
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Posted by willskith
What are you shooting with? There seems to be a lot of barrel distortion in a few of these. You can fix it pretty easy in photoshop.


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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 5 on 5/6/2009 2:34 PM >
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what area were these photos taken in? I think i recognize the house.

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 6 on 5/8/2009 1:27 AM >
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Posted by MarineAD
what area were these photos taken in? I think i recognize the house.


Ontario...

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 7 on 5/14/2009 6:32 AM >
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Everybody seems to have a comment about #8. I love it. I think it's the best one in the bunch. I really dig the low contrast feel to it too. Looks like it was shot in the era when that house was built.

Do you have any other angles of #3? It is a shame that the focal point of your photo is slightly obscured by shadow. I like the treatment on this one too.

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 8 on 5/14/2009 8:27 AM >
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Posted by Sir2nv


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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 9 on 5/18/2009 4:31 PM >
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Posted by Dresden


I spy with my little eye, something that is close.


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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 10 on 5/18/2009 6:15 PM >
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They all are really good, but that 8 is awesome, it would work like big framed poster on the wall. Beautiful view.

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 11 on 5/20/2009 1:32 PM >
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I put that trike there!!



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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 12 on 5/20/2009 9:50 PM >
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I like 6 and 7 because of the locations, and how you've captured them... but perhaps shouldnt have been cropped so tight on the left side...In both.

Great set!

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 13 on 5/21/2009 12:56 AM >
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Posted by G.U.
I like 6 and 7 because of the locations, and how you've captured them... but perhaps shouldnt have been cropped so tight on the left side...In both.

Great set!

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Have you been to 6?

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 14 on 5/21/2009 2:53 PM >
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Posted by inviolate_light
Do you have any other angles of #3? It is a shame that the focal point of your photo is slightly obscured by shadow. I like the treatment on this one too.


I love the shadow in this one. makes it more unique.

#4 is my favorite. The color, lighting and comp couldn't be better.

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 15 on 5/21/2009 3:35 PM >
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Posted by Sir2nv


Have you been to 6?


No m8 I don't recognize it actually now you asked. I thought it was the same location originally...7 I have for sure

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 16 on 5/21/2009 6:40 PM >
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No m8 I don't recognize it actually now you asked. I thought it was the same location originally...7 I have for sure




7... I knew you had ;) If you are ever in my area Kitchener Waterloo shoot me a

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 17 on 5/21/2009 9:16 PM >
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Where's the girls?

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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 18 on 5/22/2009 2:38 PM >
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Posted by spin
I put that trike there!!




Although I could have sworn I put it back



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Re: The Girls Of Summer
<Reply # 19 on 5/22/2009 7:54 PM >
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Posted by spin


Although I could have sworn I put it back






It was else where when we got there...


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