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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Old Vette dealership... (Viewed 342 times) y2knowledge  Location: Dallas, TX Gender: Male  |  |  |  |  Old Vette dealership... < on 2/26/2009 9:29 PM >   Got these within an hour, my first actual exploration in a loooooooooooooooong time. Feel free to critique. Be gentle, all I have is Irfanview for editing!... 1. Entry!... click to view 2. Vandalism... click to view 3. No es salida... click to view 4. Broke... click to view 5. Almost cut myself... click to view 6. Grillz :-D click to view 7. Sit... click to view 8. Sk8ter invasion... click to view 9. Warhol cars... click to view Thanks!... My name is Legion, for we are many... gr8fzy1  Location: Waterbury, CT Gender: Male Fewer and Fewer...  |  |  |  Re: Old Vette dealership... <Reply # 1 on 2/26/2009 9:49 PM >   Lol, I saw that first shot and BaseHunter's "The Big Show" started playing in my head. My only suggestion is that you not center your shots so much. Like in 'broke', it might look better with the light fixture more towards the right, leading your eyes from the sharp glass to the blurred doorway. Or in 'sit', moving the chair towards the lower right so that it's extended shadow points towards the empty room. And holy crap, is that ramp right in front of a mechanic's pit? Softly creeping through Empty hallways decades old, glimpsing history. y2knowledge  Location: Dallas, TX Gender: Male  |  |  |  |  Re: Old Vette dealership... <Reply # 2 on 2/26/2009 9:53 PM >   Yep, that ramp goes over a pit where there's another ramp. There were a couple more but my pregnant wife called me and I had to scoot. I might go back to see what else I can find, like roof access maybe. Thanks for the tips though, I could really use em!... My name is Legion, for we are many... gr8fzy1  Location: Waterbury, CT Gender: Male Fewer and Fewer...  |  |  |  Re: Old Vette dealership... <Reply # 3 on 2/26/2009 10:03 PM >   Posted by y2knowledge Yep, that ramp goes over a pit where there's another ramp. There were a couple more but my pregnant wife called me and I had to scoot. I might go back to see what else I can find, like roof access maybe. Thanks for the tips though, I could really use em!... You are very welcome. I did the same thing for a while. Softly creeping through Empty hallways decades old, glimpsing history. AKBC  Location: Colorado Gender: Female  |  |  Re: Old Vette dealership... <Reply # 4 on 3/2/2009 4:16 PM >   Good set for your first explore in a long time. I've only been photographing anything more than snapshots for just over 2 months, so I'm a bit novice to be offering my critiques, but I'm returning the favor like you asked...hope my input helps. #2 Composition could be more exciting if the hanging light fixture was a bit off center in either direction...the subject seems lost amidst all the other action in the frame. #5 Love it...wouldn't change anything. #1, #4, #8 Would cut out some of the empty negative space around the subject. #9 is a bit dark...longer exposure next time? UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Old Vette dealership... (Viewed 342 times) All content and images copyright © 2002-2024 UER.CA and respective creators. Graphical Design by Crossfire. To contact webmaster, or click to email with problems or other questions about this site: UER CONTACT View Terms of Service | View Privacy Policy | Server colocation provided by Beanfield This page was generated for you in 62 milliseconds. Since June 23, 2002, a total of 738453051 pages have been generated.