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 HeresToLife88
   
Location: Union County
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< on 12/3/2008 6:25 AM >
|  | | | Just 1 for now because i am tired and have work in a couple hours. But have at it better/worse than last time? I will add more if response is good or as i get time as the week goes on.
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Now They've Put Bars Across The Park Benches, So I Guess It's Illegal To Sleep... |
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Wolfheart
 
Gender: Male
| | | Re: 2nd Time With Model
<Reply # 1 on 12/3/2008 9:10 AM >
| | | | Bit of sharpness and this would be excellent. Now it is just good+. 
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suicidepactphoto
Location: Western New York
Gender: Male
" Did he who made the lamb make thee? "
| |  | Re: 2nd Time With Model
<Reply # 2 on 12/3/2008 9:35 AM >
| | | | When shooting a model under any conditions the model should always be the focus of the photograph. I find myself searching for the model in the dark in this shot and then when I find her she is out of focus with her her head down.
Try using the background to the fullest but not making the focus the background. Work on making every image a clean,crisp and sharp shot. I think your other set way far better than this one. Keep playing and you will find what you are looking for.
"We kiss on the mouth but still cough down our sleeves"
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PhotoSeeker
Location: Sudbury
Gender: Male
MikeOnline
| | | Re: 2nd Time With Model
<Reply # 3 on 12/3/2008 12:00 PM >
| | | | Posted by suicidepactphoto
I find myself searching for the model in the dark in this shot and then when I find her she is out of focus with her her head down.
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I half agree with you.
I think it should be a bit sharper, but for me, her almost obscurity is part of the message... the feeling that she's lost. To remove that element, in my opinion, would be to turn it into another banal model picture in a dirty building.
My very unprofessional two cents.
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masiakowski
Location: Scotland | Poland
Gender: Male
Way To Illusion
| | | Re: 2nd Time With Model
<Reply # 4 on 12/3/2008 12:02 PM >
| | | | Yup, I would go for tripod if shooting in such spaces. It's always limited light (most cases) so actually some sort of support would be necessary. However, the photo itself is really nice - shows the isolation and sort of a tension.
Haha, such photography is actually my favourite - people in abandoned spaces.
'None are more hopelessly enslaved than those who falsely believe they are free.' Goethe |
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HeresToLife88
Location: Union County
| | | | Re: 2nd Time With Model
<Reply # 5 on 12/3/2008 3:06 PM >
| | | | I kind of wanted it to have the softer grainy kind of feel to make it feel almost like more of a dream nightmare kind of thing, i could see going slightly sharper now that I'm looking at it today though(now that I'm actually awake), going into it taking this picture I didn't really want a clean sharp picture, I did take some other pictures that are kinda more the same style as the other model thread I posted, just need some time to edit those.
I'm thinking this one would work better as part of a set that I think I am going to start working on, I have a few pictures already that can go with this one that i need to edit up some...
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masiakowski
Location: Scotland | Poland
Gender: Male
Way To Illusion
| | | Re: 2nd Time With Model
<Reply # 6 on 12/3/2008 6:21 PM >
| | | | Looking forward to seeing those
'None are more hopelessly enslaved than those who falsely believe they are free.' Goethe |
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T-Staff
Location: Laurel(L-Town), Maryland
Gender: Female
| | | | Re: 2nd Time With Model
<Reply # 7 on 12/10/2008 6:00 AM >
| | | | honestly the photo does not do much for me.
Perhaps if a bit more detail of the surroundings was there, or another position for the model, might grasp attention a bit better.
[last edit 12/10/2008 6:00 AM by T-Staff - edited 1 times]
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Paranoid?
Gender: Male
F/RoX FTMFW
| | | Re: 2nd Time With Model
<Reply # 8 on 12/10/2008 12:00 PM >
| | | | The lack of sharpness and darkness in this shot does help create a mood. well done.
"Take time to deliberate; but when the time for action arrives... stop thinking and go in."
- Napoleon Bonaparte |
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Martino
Location: Almere - NL
Gender: Male
2,5 days 5691 km, 1200 cigarettes, 131 beers, 67 locations, 3 girs and 2 cars! I absolutely rule!
| | | Re: 2nd Time With Model
<Reply # 9 on 12/11/2008 8:44 PM >
| | | | hauntingly good! bit sharper would be nice...on the other hand.....
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JMSvenungson
Location: Sweden
Gender: Male
Its always funny until someone gets hurt, then its just hilarious.
| |  | | Re: 2nd Time With Model
<Reply # 10 on 12/12/2008 12:12 AM >
| | | | Posted by HeresToLife88
...wanted it to have the softer grainy kind of feel to make it feel almost like more of a dream nightmare kind of thing...
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I think it worked out well, i like the mood of the picture and sometimes a "perfect photo" isn't what you want.
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