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 HeresToLife88
   
Location: Union County
 |  |  |  | A Few Out Of The Fire
< on 6/20/2008 10:59 PM >
|  | | | A Few From This Afternoon, Some Quick Touch Ups On Them. Unfortunately A Lot From Today Didn't Come Out Like I Hoped.. Just one of those days I guess.
Equipment Used;
Canon Rebel Xti
18-55 Lens
Lens Polarized Filter
Criticism / Comments Definitely Welcome, I've Still Got A Lot To Learn. Still Getting Used To The Camera.
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Thanks,
~Jason
Now They've Put Bars Across The Park Benches, So I Guess It's Illegal To Sleep... |
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ralphbacon
| | Re: A Few Out Of The Fire
<Reply # 1 on 6/22/2008 3:07 PM >
| | | | Great stuff! A few suggestions:
1. Great shot! The floor could be exposed a little bit better, of course this would be difficult to do without blowing out the sky.. perhaps lighten it up a bit in photoshop? also, see how the doors are curved a little bit? This is probably because you were shooting at 18mm. BUT, I do think it works for this image! if you wanted to vertically correct it or any other image where there is lens distortion, you can fix that in photoshop too.
2. Awesome! The exposure is good! my only suggestion is to add a little bit more contrast to the walls.
3. Nice depth of field! Perhaps lighten it a little bit?
4. Great!
5. Perhaps just lighten up the shadows a little bit? Other then that, another great shot!
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IDChris
Location: Southern Idaho Wasteland
Gender: Male
| | Re: A Few Out Of The Fire
<Reply # 2 on 6/27/2008 7:19 PM >
| | | | I like detail shots, such as the knob and light fixture.
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DJ Craig
     
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Location: Johnson City, TN
Gender: Male
Break the Silence
| | | | Re: A Few Out Of The Fire
<Reply # 3 on 7/1/2008 1:22 PM >
| | | | #1 - This is my fav. Although the sky could do with being a bit darker. Play with "Selective Color" and maybe a slight hue adjustment in Photoshop.
#2 - This is also really good! At first I thought it was an HDR, but then I saw that you were using a polaroid, so I guess that's all it is?
#3 - I like this, but a more interesting angle and some DoF would have made it a lot more interesting.
#4 - Not that there is anything you could have done about it, but I don't like the unbalanced lighting. It feels lop-sided. But maybe that's just me.
#5 - Awesome subject! Its a good shot, but again a more interesting angle (perhaps getting closer, if your lens allows) and maybe a bit more DoF would have helped.
OK, I'm being pretty critical, but I really like the set a lot overall! The subject is awesome, and the photos aren't bad at all! I think the set is greater than the sum of the shots, if that makes any sense.  Keep these photos displayed together.
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go..." -Dr. Suess |
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starberries
Location: West Chester, Pennsylvania
Gender: Female
| | Re: A Few Out Of The Fire
<Reply # 4 on 7/5/2008 3:13 AM >
| | | | The shots are really great, especially 3 and 5. My only critique is that you should try playing with making them a little lighter. I think a lot of lovely detail was lost in the darkness of shots 2 and 4. Otherwise great though!
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