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 Brooks
   
Location: Fall River Ma
Gender: Male
 |  |  | St James state hospital
< on 2/14/2008 1:44 PM >
|  | | | These are kind of older but I dont think I ever posted them I could be wrong though, rip them up please
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Edit/mod: Fixed the title since the user seems to have some problem with his SHIFT key.
[last edit 3/12/2008 12:00 AM by Mickael - edited 1 times]
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don_corleyone
Location: F/RoX
Gender: Male
I have abandonment issues
| | Re: St JaMeS sTaTe HoSpItAl
<Reply # 1 on 2/14/2008 2:46 PM >
| | | | 1. unless that wall leans like a bitch at that place, i'd have fixed the perspective distortion in post.
2. the B&W is more like B&gray. reset the white point to give it some contrast.
3. i like. maybe some levels, highlights and shadows to brighten the under-exposed interior. leave the window as is tho.
4. the leaning tower of pizza on the right is really distracting, but i like what you've got going on in the rest of the shot. crop that right hand wall out and straighten the right column and you're set.
[last edit 2/14/2008 2:47 PM by don_corleyone - edited 1 times]
leave the gun. take the cannoli.
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zmuh11
Location: St. Louis
Gender: Male
| | Re: St JaMeS sTaTe HoSpItAl
<Reply # 2 on 2/14/2008 3:37 PM >
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1. I like what's going on in this picture. To make it more interesting I'd say crop off the top and bottom of the picture to the corners of that big window. And yeah when you stare at it the wall feels like it's a coming down.
2. There's really not even any darks in this shot. It's just really all gray. More contrast definitely needed, and crop off a little bit of the bottom.
3. I too like the window in this one. Don't change anything on that, but on the rest make it a little brighter and crop the right side almost right up to the edge of that vent next to the chair.
4. Definitely get rid of that wall on the right side, it hurts the eyes. It's almost like there is a haze in the middle of the picture near the top of the columns. I'm not sure if you could get rid of that, but try.
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Brooks
Location: Fall River Ma
Gender: Male
| | | Re: St JaMeS sTaTe HoSpItAl
<Reply # 3 on 2/14/2008 4:19 PM >
| | | | Thanks! The haze is really a haze the whole hospital has broken steam pipes that are still working so all of the basements and usually first floor is filled with steam. thats for the critique
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182 lbs of sad
Location: in the gym training my ass off!
Gender: Male
| | Re: St JaMeS sTaTe HoSpItAl
<Reply # 4 on 2/28/2008 5:11 AM >
| | | | sunrise is not at 5am brooks. thats all i can say. asshole...... ha ha it was still fun.
[last edit 2/28/2008 5:11 AM by 182 lbs of sad - edited 1 times]
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
| | Re: St JaMeS sTaTe HoSpItAl
<Reply # 5 on 3/1/2008 5:32 AM >
| | | | i like the first one....interesting angle
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ryan
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Location: Providence RI
Gender: Male
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| | |  | Re: St JaMeS sTaTe HoSpItAl
<Reply # 6 on 3/1/2008 7:34 AM >
| | | | Posted by 508explore
sunrise is not at 5am brooks. thats all i can say. asshole...... ha ha it was still fun.
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sunrise isn't till like 630 or 700 lol
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182 lbs of sad
Location: in the gym training my ass off!
Gender: Male
| | Re: St JaMeS sTaTe HoSpItAl
<Reply # 7 on 3/2/2008 12:26 AM >
| | | | Posted by ryan
sunrise isn't till like 630 or 700 lol
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yea tell brooks that because when we went we sat in the cold for 3 hours waiting for the sun.
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yumology
 
Location: Arizona
Gender: Male
| | Re: St JaMeS sTaTe HoSpItAl
<Reply # 8 on 3/2/2008 2:02 AM >
| | | | This place looks really cool. I get the feeling is a psycho ward or crazy house. I would feel like I'm going crazy just wandering around with slanted walls, blown up floors and rounder windows.
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Brooks
Location: Fall River Ma
Gender: Male
| | | Re: St JaMeS sTaTe HoSpItAl
<Reply # 9 on 3/4/2008 6:05 AM >
| | | | hahahaha
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182 lbs of sad
Location: in the gym training my ass off!
Gender: Male
| | Re: St JaMeS sTaTe HoSpItAl
<Reply # 10 on 3/5/2008 1:02 PM >
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it was still fun.i like moxx too
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quinwound
Location: Rochester
| | | Re: St JaMeS sTaTe HoSpItAl
<Reply # 11 on 3/11/2008 10:13 PM >
| | | | 1) Consider playing with the curves and some local curves. Also like what has been said, play with the perspective.
2)I edited some of those grays away so I could talk about the image and not the shades of Grey.
Secondly, Next time use a tripod. The floor tiles color to you have motion blur, not a lot but something wobbled while this photograph was taken.
Thirdly, You well on the composition. You avoided the concept that converging lines must make a good shot. Props on the composition. Maybe next time try other angles rather than the human view point perspective.
An exercise in this is to pick an animal like a cat for example and shoot from a cats perspective.(6 to 12 inches off the ground.)
3)Nice, Good job. Though I think that you need to work on your tones. You almost had it here. This image needs some clean up and then some photoshopping.
4) I think that this is your worst shot by far. I would scrap this shot.
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Brooks
Location: Fall River Ma
Gender: Male
| | | Re: St James state hospital
<Reply # 12 on 3/12/2008 12:15 AM >
| | | | The last shot was complete fog in the basement from the broken steam pipes. the rest of the shots were all 2 or 3 shots bracketed and blended. just so you know. thanks though.
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