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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > i saw a star glowing through the melting walls (Viewed 410 times)
bonesy12 


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i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
< on 2/7/2008 6:17 PM >
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just a few pics from last year. i had to compress them to post and they lost quite a bit of their original quality unfortunately. i'm very new to photography and just want some feedback on 'em. thanks!
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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 1 on 2/7/2008 6:20 PM >
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2 and 3 are pretty sweet. I really like the angle on that tree.

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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 2 on 2/7/2008 6:33 PM >
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the second two are pretty rad. next time don't compress them, host them elsewhere, and post them 600x800 or so (instead of attaching them).





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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 3 on 2/7/2008 8:00 PM >
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The one with the tree looks really good! Nice work on all of them.

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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 4 on 2/7/2008 9:11 PM >
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#2 and 3 are FANTASTIC! The first one has great composition, but there's something a little off that I can't put my finger on... I think it has more to do with the compression of the file, though. It looks a little hazy.

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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 5 on 2/7/2008 10:50 PM >
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Posted by //Bryant
#2 and 3 are FANTASTIC! The first one has great composition, but there's something a little off that I can't put my finger on... I think it has more to do with the compression of the file, though. It looks a little hazy.


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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 6 on 2/7/2008 11:11 PM >
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You have some really nice shots here. You have unique angles, which is very refreshing to see. The same old hallway or wheelchair shot gets a little old after a while. Number one seems a little blown out to me though.

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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 7 on 2/7/2008 11:48 PM >
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1 is a little too blurry, but 3 is cool, and 2 is awesome. What's the story behind #2?

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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 8 on 2/8/2008 12:25 AM >
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1. blurry.
2. good but maybe a little bit more would have done nice for the composition.
3. I like it, nice angle Not sure if its foggy or just the light but its good

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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 9 on 2/8/2008 5:22 AM >
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Before I comment, get a photobucket so you don't have to compress them to under 100k.

Now


1. I like the composition and the lighting, but the blurriness destroys any coolness that this photo had, sorry. Take a tripod next time.

2. The color is good, but other than that I don't feel any real sense of composition. It's just not that interesting. Something you could have done was get closer to the drain and shot it like a portal to another world, but as is it's dull.

3. Best of the three by far, loving the angle. Some may call it extreme but it works well. It is a bit overexposed, especially in the upper branches where almost all detail is lost. What were you shooting with, because if you have a digi-cam with a manual mode shoot at -1.0 exposure in these kind of situations. Or maybe try your hand at an HDR shot?


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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 10 on 2/9/2008 10:48 AM >
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the 3rd = killer!

2 = nice

1 = not cool because of the blurryness

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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 11 on 2/9/2008 4:12 PM >
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Treeeeeeeee!

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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 12 on 2/9/2008 11:21 PM >
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thanks for all the feedback guys!

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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 13 on 2/10/2008 3:39 AM >
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Posted by bonesy12
thanks for all the feedback guys!


Thanks for the pics!

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Re: i saw a star glowing through the melting walls
<Reply # 14 on 2/11/2008 10:15 PM >
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I wanna see that tree in person. It's so beautiful...

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