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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > critique for a friend! (Viewed 265 times)
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critique for a friend!
< on 12/26/2007 7:00 AM >
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well one of my friends took some pretty baller pics and wanted some critiques on them. what do you guys think?

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Re: critique for a friend!
<Reply # 1 on 12/26/2007 1:00 PM >
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more photoshop.

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Re: critique for a friend!
<Reply # 2 on 12/26/2007 1:06 PM >
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There's something on his/her lens *glances over at anti-static wipes

In all seriousness I don't think the overlay stuff adds anything to these as photographs, if you take away the brushes/overlays(?)

1. Pretty uninteresting corridor, what appears to be potentially the most interesting part of the pic, far left, is obscured by the lime greenery.

2. Too much floor in the fore-mid ground (imo), angle doesn't really add anything to the shot and the cityscape, although interesting, appears to be incidental as the mid level ground/rocks seem to be the focus of the pic.

3. The best of the bunch (and not because it's a pretty girl). An appealing pic, the hair across the face, the softness etc, nice. Be interesting to see the same pic without the overlay framing to see whether in this instance it has actually aided the pic?

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Re: critique for a friend!
<Reply # 3 on 12/27/2007 12:16 AM >
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I really like them, but maybe its just the graphic designer in me speaking.

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Re: critique for a friend!
<Reply # 4 on 12/27/2007 1:31 PM >
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I don't get it...

well if made to be used as a flyer, i would say: maybe.
if intented just as a photo, i would say: failed.

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Re: critique for a friend!
<Reply # 5 on 12/27/2007 2:19 PM >
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Yea I would have to agree, the last one kind of works maybe, but I feel that the others look kinda half finished or something like you could alot more to them.

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Re: critique for a friend!
<Reply # 6 on 12/29/2007 5:22 AM >
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They're kinda hit and miss IMO.
I'm not much a fan of the graphic overlay stuff, so bear with me.

The first one looks great! The colors compliment each other and the photo has a decent composition.

The second one I am sorry to say I do not like at all. The composition is perplexing. The photo does not have a specific subject. If the roof is the subject than the subject looks boring... and if the skyline is the subject, than there's an ugly roof in the way. And the graphic overlay does nothing to compliment it. Sorry if this is very harsh, which I am aware it is, but I really don't like this shot.

The third one looks cool though. Only thing I noticed is that the one stripe of white is pointing at her nostril, hahaha.

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Make sure he keeps it up though, no harm in experimenting.

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