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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > no way off (Viewed 341 times)
yota94 


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no way off
< on 12/21/2007 12:08 PM >
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these are from a while ago but im hopefully going back here soon SOOOOO....please help me out with ripping these photos wide open...how can they improve???














p.s. please disregaurd the poor coverup job in the doorway in the last photo...both shots i snapped had a different person in it (same pose and all) without me noticing until i got home
[last edit 12/21/2007 12:38 PM by yota94 - edited 2 times]

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Re: no way off
<Reply # 1 on 12/22/2007 10:51 AM >
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They all suck... you should just quit.

That's right, you = fail!










J/K bro... I can't wait to hit this!!!

06:01:50] <Chris> i mean im retarded and im not that awkward

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Re: no way off
<Reply # 2 on 12/22/2007 5:15 PM >
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#2 is my favorite, but the tilt kind of ruins it. The bush or tree on the bottom left is cut kind of funny too. I'd either include a big more of it in the frame or cut it out all together.

I think #1 could be greatly improved by cropping a bit off the right and bottom. The pillar and the corner of bright sunlight are both distracting, but its kind of a cool shot otherwise.

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Re: no way off
<Reply # 3 on 12/22/2007 10:57 PM >
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Posted by Dowcet
#2 is my favorite, but the tilt kind of ruins it. The bush or tree on the bottom left is cut kind of funny too. I'd either include a big more of it in the frame or cut it out all together.

I think #1 could be greatly improved by cropping a bit off the right and bottom. The pillar and the corner of bright sunlight are both distracting, but its kind of a cool shot otherwise.


oh thanks very good advise...no thanks to jeep ; ) haha

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Re: no way off
<Reply # 4 on 12/30/2007 9:23 PM >
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okay im really bored so i figure ill just help you out by giving some critiques on these. this way itll help you get better and itll kill my boredom! dude, its win win!

okay

what i like:

pic 1: how the doorway is square with the edges of the picture, the light coming form overtop of the roof/canopy

pic 2: bbblluueeeee sky, totally black windows (get those greys outta there yo!)

pic 3: blue sky, blue water,

pic 4: no offense but this picture is kind of snap shotty



what could be improved:

pic 1: it could just be my monitor but the picture seems a bit bright

pic 2: rotate the image a couple of degrees counterclockwise so the corner of the building is parallel with the picture edges. crop out the bushes on the bottom.

pic 3: rotate the image so the rightmost edge of the building is parallel with the edge of the picture (im sorry if i sound like a broken record but straight pictures rub me the right way)

pic 4: i think this is the weakest of the set unfortunately. there is not really a clear subject and the colors are not as vibrant as in the other 3 pictures.

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