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 ryan
  
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< on 12/6/2007 11:24 PM >
|  | | | I would like feelings on this picture and ideas of how it could have been better.
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atomx
   
Location: Brighton, ON
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 1 on 12/6/2007 11:39 PM >
| | | | A little more fore light.
Or side lighting. (left side)
[last edit 12/6/2007 11:40 PM by atomx - edited 1 times]
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Glass
 
Location: Chicago
as one does
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<Reply # 2 on 12/6/2007 11:40 PM >
| | | | Did you 'Sharpen Edges'?
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ryan
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Location: Providence RI
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<Reply # 3 on 12/6/2007 11:42 PM >
| | | | Posted by Glass
Did you 'Sharpen Edges'?
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Unsharp mask barely.
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heinrick
Location: Cascadia
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 4 on 12/6/2007 11:43 PM >
| | | | Perhaps some bracket-and-blending to up the values on the floor?
Or, you could satisfy popular demand with a suicide girl in there.
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Glass
Location: Chicago
as one does
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<Reply # 5 on 12/6/2007 11:43 PM >
| | | | I like it; wouldn't want anything brighter, honestly.
Great shadow range, and the pink highlights are stunning.
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Lord Awesome
Location: Valparaiso IN
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 6 on 12/6/2007 11:45 PM >
| | | | I actually think the lighting works quite well. although it almost seems like the shot maybe could have been better if taken a bit higher, but then at the same time that may have made the angle on the tub a bit less appealing...hmmmmm
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ryan
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Location: Providence RI
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<Reply # 7 on 12/7/2007 12:10 AM >
| | | | Posted by heinrick
Perhaps some bracket-and-blending to up the values on the floor?
Or, you could satisfy popular demand with a suicide girl in there.
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I actually had one in there but I clone stamped her out because I didn't want to get made fun of.
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systemx29
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<Reply # 8 on 12/7/2007 1:16 AM >
| | | | i dont like how the long window is cut off ever so slightly and the bottom left of that vent grate is barely showing.
otherwise,i really like it.
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Nyssa
Location: Los Angeles
Gender: Female
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<Reply # 9 on 12/7/2007 1:18 AM >
| | | | Unless the ceiling was -right there-, I would've placed the bathtub lower in the frame and not cut off the window.
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ryan
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Location: Providence RI
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<Reply # 10 on 12/7/2007 2:19 AM >
| | | | In reply to the window being cut off at the top- My tripod legs are broken so they will not go up as high as they should, I am extremely anal about vertical lines so i refuse to just tilt the camera up because then the lines will be off.
So I guess I will have to re-shoot this when after I get my new tripod on christmas.
Thanks for the feed back everyone.
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maypost
Location: North, South, East, West, all around... then down to the underground
Gender: Male
Exploring if for n00bz0rz
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<Reply # 11 on 12/7/2007 2:21 AM >
| | | | Posted by ryan
I would like feelings on this picture and ideas of how it could have been better.
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I should have taken it.
BAM!
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desmet
When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro.
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<Reply # 12 on 12/7/2007 3:32 AM >
| | | | Only thing that bugs me is that the composition isn't balanced and it seems like there's a slight magenta cast on the light on the wall. Otherwise the exposure, the contrast, everything looks great to me.
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Contagion
Location: Phila., PA
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 13 on 12/7/2007 3:54 AM >
| | | | I would have moved right a bit more and panned to the left some to get rid of the grate in the top right.
Also, i would have moved up a bit to frame the bottom right tighter on the tub.
In post, perhaps some shadows/highlights to fix minor issues.
Definitely some fake lens flare and a sweet stained glass filter would be good. Maybe top it off with some glowing edges, too.
Oh, and two suicide girls about to kiss would be cool.
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micro
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 14 on 12/7/2007 3:59 AM >
| | | | Like others have said, I would've shifted everything up to reveal more of the wall instead of the floor. Whatever that is that's cutting into the bottom right edge of the frame is kind of distracting as well. Get rid of it.
It might also work better in the square format.
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Martino
Location: Almere - NL
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 15 on 12/7/2007 9:24 AM >
| | | | i don't like the border, but besides that:
I know that bottom is a bit dark, but depending on what (pc or print) you want to show this i would make the bottom a bit brighter if you're gonna show this on the www as for prints (more likely larger) there is enough detail in the dak part - i would leave it as it is now.
it just makes the shot a bit better if the window wasn't cut off - but you got some good reasons for that. So you know that yourself.
About the ventilation shaft in the right upper corner being cut off - i don't mind. I don't mind things being cut off as long as it doesn't draw to much attention.
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mortimer
Location: teronno
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<Reply # 16 on 12/7/2007 10:16 PM >
| | | | My eyes want more wall to the right of the tub, mostly due to the reflection that's cut off, but still there. I'd either like to see most of the reflection in the tiles, or none of it. Oh, and whatever the dark thing is angling in on the bottom right needs to go, now. So, yeah, I'd either reshoot, a couple feet to the left of where you were, including more of the reflection, or crop some more off the right on this one, eliminating most of the reflection and whatever that thing is.
Technically, it's good. Any fixes regarding lightening/darkening various spots are personal preference at this point. Sharpening could go either way, looks pretty natural to me though.
Edit: on second look, if you reshoot, try setting up at exactly a 45 degree angle from the corner behind the tub, putting that corner dead centre in the frame, probably horizontal. I know you know what you're doing, and probably don't want direction, but that's what I see from what's in the frame now, and I'm never going to shoot there, so humour me and pretend you will.
[last edit 12/7/2007 10:18 PM by mortimer - edited 1 times]
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nutekk
Location: Central NJ
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 17 on 12/7/2007 10:23 PM >
| | | | first off , fuck photoshop, it's for sissys!
second off, it's just fine the way it is. although, next time a tub full of hot big boobed bimbos would have gotten more of my attention 
and third off, it's just fine the way it is. i'm digging the array of natural colors
cool shot
cheers !
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Air
Location: Canada
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<Reply # 18 on 12/8/2007 1:52 AM >
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It's too dark at the bottom and it seems to have an unnatural red/pink hue. Are you editing on a LCD?
[last edit 12/8/2007 1:52 AM by Air - edited 1 times]
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