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 yota94
  
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
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< on 11/23/2007 4:58 AM >
|  | | | hey here are a couple pictures from a local place that my mom used to work at a lonnnnnnggggggg time ago. haha i happened to be near it so i helped myself in....please feel free to be harsh i could use the advice!
#1
#2
#3
#4
#5
#6
UER might as well be crack...
oh and Thats TOYOTA...dick. |
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JuiceBox889
Location: New Jersey
Gender: Male
| |  | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 1 on 11/23/2007 3:59 PM >
| | | | They're all kind of boring. Read as much as you can on composition. The second one has potential with the reflection in the water, but the rest are just kind of boring. The first few also look a bit dark. What type of camera are you using? I can't see your exif info, because I'm not on my own computer, but I would say work on your exposures, and read up on composition.
In this eerie night I will fly. I will dance in the circle of pain,
walking in this unknown empty land,
so confused for what's wrong or right. Searching for my inner power. - Nightrage-Circle of Pain |
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MHInc
  
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Location: Niagara Falls, Ontario Canada
Gender: Male
| |  | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 2 on 11/23/2007 4:09 PM >
| | | | I would have to agree with JuiceBox889 on this one.
Work on your composition. You lighting is off, and your angles are odd.
Don't give up, keep trying. This is the Critique section, so be prepared for this.
What did you shoot these with?
MH Inc. Photography Canada
http://www.mhinccanada.com
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
| | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 3 on 11/23/2007 4:44 PM >
| | | | unfortunately i have to shoot with my "cool pix" nikon soccer mom camera wich has like a max 2 seconds exposure...and i will admit that i took these in kind of a hurry because i had to meet someone....thanks for the advise guys....any others?
UER might as well be crack...
oh and Thats TOYOTA...dick. |
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MHInc
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Location: Niagara Falls, Ontario Canada
Gender: Male
| | | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 4 on 11/23/2007 4:53 PM >
| | | | Posted by yota94
unfortunately i have to shoot with my "cool pix" nikon soccer mom camera wich has like a max 2 seconds exposure...and i will admit that i took these in kind of a hurry because i had to meet someone....thanks for the advise guys....any others?
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Well considering you are using a point and shoot, you didn't do to bad.
MH Inc. Photography Canada
http://www.mhinccanada.com
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uTjKfcmXN
Gender: Male
| | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 5 on 11/23/2007 9:27 PM >
| | | | You didn't do too bad at all little bro.
Keep working with what you got!
'Locking the hubs and airing down... there is no better way to start a weekend!' - Me |
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
| | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 6 on 11/24/2007 2:28 AM >
| | | | thanks guys i know iv deff. done better work then these tho
UER might as well be crack...
oh and Thats TOYOTA...dick. |
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Dowcet
Location: Middletown, ct
| | | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 7 on 11/24/2007 4:30 PM >
| | | | Posted by JuiceBox889
I would say work on your exposures, and read up on composition.
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I actually think a number of these compositions are above average. Especially #1, and I think the underexposure actually works OK, its just that a "fire extinguisher" sign is a pretty boring subject.
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JuiceBox889
Location: New Jersey
Gender: Male
| | | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 8 on 11/24/2007 7:30 PM >
| | | | Yea, just keep using your camera, and everything will come to you eventually. I'm still using a little point and shoot myself. Just keep shooting, shoot as much as you can.
In this eerie night I will fly. I will dance in the circle of pain,
walking in this unknown empty land,
so confused for what's wrong or right. Searching for my inner power. - Nightrage-Circle of Pain |
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
| | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 9 on 11/25/2007 5:44 AM >
| | | | Posted by Dowcet
I actually think a number of these compositions are above average. Especially #1, and I think the underexposure actually works OK, its just that a "fire extinguisher" sign is a pretty boring subject.
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thank you i agree about the fire extinguisher sign not being the most exciting of subjects however in that particular empty and half burned warehouse that was the only good thing i think i could do cuz i left my tri-pod in the car....big mistake
UER might as well be crack...
oh and Thats TOYOTA...dick. |
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seicer
  
Location: New York
Gender: Male
| | | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 10 on 11/25/2007 5:50 AM >
| | | | The first few are kind of drab, in terms of lighting, but I like the composition of the fourth and fifth -- and the lighting is improved on both. Great shots for a point and shoot!
And, because the title thread reminded me...
Abandoned |
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
| | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 11 on 11/25/2007 6:00 AM >
| | | | Posted by seicer
The first few are kind of drab, in terms of lighting, but I like the composition of the fourth and fifth -- and the lighting is improved on both. Great shots for a point and shoot!
And, because the title thread reminded me...
http://www.changet...9F9D/castanza7.jpg
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haha thanks for the compliment.
haha that does suit this thread pretty well doesn't it?
UER might as well be crack...
oh and Thats TOYOTA...dick. |
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Steed
Location: Edmonton/Seoul
Gender: Male
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Race Traitor
| | | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 12 on 11/26/2007 6:43 AM >
| | | | I think 6 came out pretty decent.
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
| | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 13 on 11/26/2007 6:48 AM >
| | | | Posted by racetraitor
I think 6 came out pretty decent.
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thank you! that was a really random thing to run across cemented to in the ground haha
UER might as well be crack...
oh and Thats TOYOTA...dick. |
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Krescentia
Location: Oklahoma
Gender: Female
[Zerstörer der Herzen]
| | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 14 on 11/26/2007 10:43 PM >
| | | | Nice pictures. ^^'
Not the most interesting pictures, sadly, but I love #2 and #3.
[last edit 11/26/2007 10:44 PM by Krescentia - edited 1 times]
Es kommt wie es kommt. |
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
| | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 15 on 11/26/2007 10:49 PM >
| | | | Posted by Krescentia
Nice pictures. ^^'
Not the most interesting pictures, sadly, but I love #2 and #3.
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thank you...i know they are not but hopefully i am going back with more time because it had lots of potential
UER might as well be crack...
oh and Thats TOYOTA...dick. |
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Krescentia
Location: Oklahoma
Gender: Female
[Zerstörer der Herzen]
| | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 16 on 11/27/2007 5:02 PM >
| | | | I'm looking forward to seeing your next pictures! ^^
Sorry if the comment seemed a little.. 'rude' or something lol. I always end up taking like a billion pictures of the same sorts of thing.. so I'm sure my shots arent so interesting either.. and on top of that I don't really have a great camera so blah! Your pictures are rather awesome quality. What camera(s) do you use? (I'm sure you've mentioned it somewhere but I'm too lazy to find out <.<)
Es kommt wie es kommt. |
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
| | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 17 on 11/29/2007 2:51 AM >
| | | | Posted by Krescentia
I'm looking forward to seeing your next pictures! ^^
Sorry if the comment seemed a little.. 'rude' or something lol. I always end up taking like a billion pictures of the same sorts of thing.. so I'm sure my shots arent so interesting either.. and on top of that I don't really have a great camera so blah! Your pictures are rather awesome quality. What camera(s) do you use? (I'm sure you've mentioned it somewhere but I'm too lazy to find out <.<)
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thank you so much!
no not at all thats why they are in the critique section =]
i use a little nikon point and shoot...the "cool pix" or something like that and i always go out with people with huge cameras so i do what i can haha but mine has a max 2 second exposure so i have to be super patient trying to lightpaint stuff...and im sure your pix arent boring =]
UER might as well be crack...
oh and Thats TOYOTA...dick. |
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freeside
Location: Northern California
Gender: Male
eh vigo!
| | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 18 on 12/4/2007 4:26 AM >
| | | | Hey man, I was at this site on Saturday night. You picked a tough one to try and photograph. There was little there worth shooting in my opinion.
Shooting this place at night with that camera is super difficult. Good start. You've got the eye, just keep practicing.
Here's one of the few shots I salvaged from that location, but you never could've got this with your camera.
Shot from the roof, at the old Sea Worthy Canvas site. Nighttime, ambient light only. The charred remains of the building on the right and the crazy sky that night make for a surreal environment. 195 sec exposure at F4.0.
Saturday night, I used to go dancing at clubs, now I hang out in places like this.
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dirt
Location: Oakland, CA
Gender: Male
Je suis très aimable et très caustique.
| |  | | Re: no jerks allowed
<Reply # 19 on 12/4/2007 5:07 AM >
| | | | Posted by seicer
The first few are kind of drab, in terms of lighting, but I like the composition of the fourth and fifth -- and the lighting is improved on both. Great shots for a point and shoot!
And, because the title thread reminded me...
http://www.changet...9F9D/castanza7.jpg
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