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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Three's a crowd (Viewed 247 times) JustPunchIt86  Location: Mass Gender: Male  |  |  |  Three's a crowd < on 11/8/2007 4:52 PM >   Just a few randoms I shot over the last few weeks, critism is encouraged with these so let it rip. www.abstruse-edifice.com "Startin' shit since 96" micro  Gender: Male Slowly I turned  |  Re: Three's a crowd <Reply # 1 on 11/8/2007 5:00 PM >   The DOF of the first one is kind of distracting. The blurry chair doesn't really add anything. Ditto for the white strip on the right edge. The last one is good but would probably work better if cropped to a square to get rid of the stuff on the right. zmuh11  Location: St. Louis Gender: Male  |  Re: Three's a crowd <Reply # 2 on 11/8/2007 5:40 PM >   I actually liked the third on as is, just s little crop of the bottom to lower the chair a little bit will make it better. 1. The blurry chair does nothing for the image, and the door frame is distracting because of the light. 2. This one looks a little overexposed, the left side needs to be cropped to match the right, and the whole image needs to be rotated so that the rollers are straight across the page. Martino  Location: Almere - NL Gender: Male 2,5 days 5691 km, 1200 cigarettes, 131 beers, 67 locations, 3 girs and 2 cars! I absolutely rule!  |  |  Re: Three's a crowd <Reply # 3 on 11/8/2007 5:56 PM >   i wouldn't crop 2, and i very much like the light in that one 2 and 3 have a weird focus http://www.flickr.com/photos/martino_ JustPunchIt86  Location: Mass Gender: Male  |  |  |  Re: Three's a crowd <Reply # 4 on 11/8/2007 6:13 PM >   Posted by Martino i wouldn't crop 2, and i very much like the light in that one 2 and 3 have a weird focus mmm yes my focus, the camera I use has a really odd DOF, Im not totally use to it yet most of these i was shooting in F11 and that still wasnt enough so maybe next time around I'll shoot at like F19 and things will start to come in better right? But thanks for the help guys! www.abstruse-edifice.com "Startin' shit since 96" UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Three's a crowd (Viewed 247 times) All content and images copyright © 2002-2024 UER.CA and respective creators. Graphical Design by Crossfire. To contact webmaster, or click to email with problems or other questions about this site: UER CONTACT View Terms of Service | View Privacy Policy | Server colocation provided by Beanfield This page was generated for you in 187 milliseconds. Since June 23, 2002, a total of 739871495 pages have been generated.