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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > That rubber factory (Viewed 633 times)
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That rubber factory
< on 7/23/2007 11:53 AM >
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please rip them apart
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Re: That rubber factory
<Reply # 1 on 7/24/2007 6:35 PM >
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#1 is good.

#2 is messy, especially in B&W.

#3 is messy.

#5, you should have gotten the whole tower thing in the shot.

#6, a little too much black, maybe crop some of the bottom? I think it would have looked better vertical, more focused on the piping on top rather than the darkness at the bottom.
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Re: That rubber factory
<Reply # 2 on 7/24/2007 7:29 PM >
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#4 looks a bit too contrasty, but that's just me

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Re: That rubber factory
<Reply # 3 on 7/29/2007 11:40 AM >
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Posted by Mark Vicious
#1 is good.

#2 is messy, especially in B&W.

#3 is messy.

#5, you should have gotten the whole tower thing in the shot.

#6, a little too much black, maybe crop some of the bottom? I think it would have looked better vertical, more focused on the piping on top rather than the darkness at the bottom.


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Re: That rubber factory
<Reply # 4 on 7/29/2007 7:22 PM >
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There is too much going on in the shot. #3 looks out of focus.

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Re: That rubber factory
<Reply # 5 on 8/24/2007 11:24 AM >
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one more for now maybe more to come, who knows.

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Re: That rubber factory
<Reply # 6 on 8/26/2007 1:13 AM >
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yeah the one with the graffiti is a little bright. maybe its just the difference in our moniters? i like the one you just posted.

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