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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > First try at a night shot (Viewed 544 times)
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First try at a night shot
< on 7/11/2007 3:02 AM >
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It was an 8 min exposure with and aperture of 11 with 200 asa film
[last edit 7/11/2007 3:03 AM by lord fudgy - edited 1 times]

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 1 on 7/11/2007 3:05 AM >
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I know I kinda croped the building at a funky angle but it I was focusing more on the exposure then my composition... which was a dumb idea.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 2 on 7/11/2007 3:13 AM >
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Are those the old houses next to that elementary school?

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 3 on 7/11/2007 3:26 AM >
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its real tight, but kind of grainy.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 4 on 7/11/2007 3:38 AM >
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i wouldve shot it in portrait. the bottom of the building is pretty cut-off. the exposure looks pretty good though.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 5 on 7/11/2007 4:05 AM >
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yea it was my first try at it ever really so i wasnt expecting any thing good but i kinda like this one.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 6 on 7/11/2007 5:39 AM >
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For your first try, it's not bad at all. Build off of what you learned in that picture.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 7 on 7/11/2007 10:44 AM >
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Good exposure and colors but I'm going to have to agree with the 'chopped off' building.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 8 on 7/11/2007 6:22 PM >
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I like it mr. fudgy pants.
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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 9 on 7/12/2007 12:24 AM >
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i love the sky...
it adds to the surreal feeling the colours produce.

also, i kinda like the choppy building.. almost makes me think of something sinister!

very nice.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 10 on 7/12/2007 7:24 AM >
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I like it. A lot.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 11 on 7/13/2007 1:58 AM >
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It's a little extreme to me... but I like it! Maybe if the exposure time was a little shorter? I like star movement though. ^_~

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 12 on 7/13/2007 7:13 AM >
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i would have maybe moved back a little or indulged in a wide angle lens there, the angle of the building is nice with the trees there and what not, the whole building would be good though

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 13 on 7/13/2007 1:34 PM >
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overall i like it. the building does feel "chopped off" so i agree with either the wider angle lens or moving back option.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 14 on 7/14/2007 5:02 AM >
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First of all, serious props for shooting at night on film, I've just started screwing around with night photohraphy on digital and I can't imgaine not having that instand feedback to see wheater it's a exposure or just totally bitched up. Other than the aforementioned crop issues my only gripe is that the exposure is a little uneven. Is there some source of artifical light that is illuminating the front of the building and not the side? That would be my next point to work on, play arond with iy and see if you can even out the exposure a little bit.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 15 on 7/14/2007 9:02 PM >
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^Especially for 8 minutes, I can't imagine doing that

The exposure is really great, the colors are very interesting
The composition isn't all that great, but it's still really nice
Nice shot overall


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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 16 on 7/15/2007 10:16 AM >
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Posted by GWarren
^Especially for 8 minutes, I can't imagine doing that

The exposure is really great, the colors are very interesting
The composition isn't all that great, but it's still really nice
Nice shot overall



You can't imagine an exposure going for 8 minutes?
Jeez, my night photos are at least 15 minutes these days. Averagely 20, and up to 30 minutes, though.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 17 on 7/15/2007 5:41 PM >
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should have done a shorter exposer. the front of the house is really blown up. other than that the colors look really cool.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 18 on 7/16/2007 5:26 PM >
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Yea there was a light on the front of the Building.

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Re: First try at a night shot
<Reply # 19 on 7/16/2007 6:53 PM >
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Level the camera. I agree about shooting it portrait too. I would probably color correct this in photoshop as well...those god damned sodium lights suck.

Great first attempt though...really good.

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