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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > New Photographer, tell me what you think. (Viewed 374 times)
Sketchbag 


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New Photographer, tell me what you think.
< on 5/29/2007 4:21 PM >
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Hey there! I'm new to photography (at least as an art form) and would really appreciate some constructive criticism. I only have a few digital shots uploaded right now but there will definitely be more to come. I'm shooting using a Canon EOS Rebel XTi with the stock 18-55 lens that it came with.

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Re: New Photographer, tell me what you think.
<Reply # 1 on 5/29/2007 4:34 PM >
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I probably know as much about photography as you but all these shots look like they were taken at eye level. I think composing them from a different perspective could have greatly improved them. great start nonetheless.


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Re: New Photographer, tell me what you think.
<Reply # 2 on 5/29/2007 4:57 PM >
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thanks speed. I try to take shots from different perspectives, but yeah the first three were taken at eye level. And now when I think of it... damn they would have been nicer taken at a different perspective.

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Re: New Photographer, tell me what you think.
<Reply # 3 on 5/29/2007 9:09 PM >
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Pretty nice shots, the first is lacking compostion
I like the subject in the second one
On the third one, you should have centered yourself in the hall, and it should be a little brighter, or more vibrant.

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Re: New Photographer, tell me what you think.
<Reply # 4 on 5/30/2007 1:50 AM >
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1 and 3 stand out, 1 for pattern and 3 for texture/color/perspective. 3 would benefit if you closed that fire exingisher door and made the camera more level, 1 could either use a better exposed sky or a possible crop to bring out the stairs?


I like the shadows in 4.

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Re: New Photographer, tell me what you think.
<Reply # 5 on 5/30/2007 2:54 AM >
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Oh, my... I love them all!

Number 1 is a nice facade shot, but it leaves something to be desired in my opinion. Number two is gorgeous (loving the angle chosen for the shot). Number three is nice in terms of angle and composition but, as it was with number one, lacks in something indescribable... and number four is just awesome. The angle, lighting...! I love it!

Good work, you definitely are an artist! Keep at it!

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Re: New Photographer, tell me what you think.
<Reply # 6 on 6/1/2007 5:56 AM >
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Xti and good places to shoot with it. very nice shots by the way

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Re: New Photographer, tell me what you think.
<Reply # 7 on 6/1/2007 10:47 PM >
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Not a bad start, I like the first shot... EXCEPT that crooked pole in the way!! Dont worry I often do the same kind of thing... lol

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Re: New Photographer, tell me what you think.
<Reply # 8 on 6/1/2007 11:39 PM >
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Amazing for being a beginner i like the second one. Well done.

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