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Clever Girl
Location: Circle of Least Confusion
RPS is inside all of us
 |  |  | Hospital of Collapsing Breezeways
< on 5/29/2007 2:06 AM >
|  | | | I paid an old friend a visit this weekend and somehow had forgotten how colorful she was. Feel free to critique and tear these apart, as I would like to improve.
Shot on a digital Canon Rebel XT using a tripod during one of the muggiest days in recent memory. Please excuse the solo chairs and peeling paint. I could not help myself.
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Get down, girl, go 'head, get down. |
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KroniK
Gender: Male
In search of the perfect glass of kool-aid....Oh Yea!
| | Re: Hospital of Collapsing Breezeways
<Reply # 1 on 5/29/2007 2:16 AM >
| | | | i dont think any of these really need any critiqueing. it seems like you know what your doing. i like em! 5 is my personal favorite.
brainwash= shoot your brains in a bathroom tub. |
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maypost
Location: North, South, East, West, all around... then down to the underground
Gender: Male
Exploring if for n00bz0rz
| | Re: Hospital of Collapsing Breezeways
<Reply # 2 on 5/29/2007 2:20 AM >
| | | | I would know that 3-legged chair anywhere!
Great stuff there!
Exploring is like tattoos... They stopped being cool in 2005
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Speed
Location: Philly area
Gender: Male
Retired Explorer
| | Re: Hospital of Collapsing Breezeways
<Reply # 3 on 5/29/2007 2:41 AM >
| | | | the lighting in some of these is fantastic.
good stuff, nice work.
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SumoPope
Location: Cleveland
Gender: Male
I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate.
| |  | Re: Hospital of Collapsing Breezeways
<Reply # 4 on 5/30/2007 1:45 AM >
| | | | Posted by KroniK
i dont think any of these really need any critiqueing. it seems like you know what your doing. i like em! 5 is my personal favorite.
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I agree. 3 might benefit from being shot dead on instead of at a minor angle, and 7 could be cropped or came in closer to emphasize the doorway. 5 has a minor crop of the chair leg. Other than that, they look perfect.
This is just my opinion, but these shots feel too safe compositionally to really stand out. They are very nice and pleasant to look at, but are lacking somehow IMHO. I understand if you want to do it that way, and I hope what I just said doesn't offend you.
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femaledragonx
Location: Detroit & Everywhere Else I can dream up to go to
The singularity is near
| | Re: Hospital of Collapsing Breezeways
<Reply # 5 on 5/30/2007 3:10 AM >
| | | | looks like you are pretty damn good at solo chairs...
i love #5, now please return to your beloved location and reshoot it to include that front closest leg so i can frame a copy and hang it on my wall.
good stuff miss PUEP gangstar.
"Collective fear stimulates herd instinct, and tends to produce ferocity toward those who are not regarded as members of the herd." -Bertrand Russell
"How we spend our days is, of course, how we spend our lives." ~Annie Dillard |
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don_corleyone
Location: F/RoX
Gender: Male
I have abandonment issues
| | Re: Hospital of Collapsing Breezeways
<Reply # 6 on 5/30/2007 2:38 PM >
| | | | we must've just missed you. we were there on a very muggy day this weekend as well. would have been funny to cross paths again unexpectedly.
excellent work, numbers 1 and 5 in particular.
leave the gun. take the cannoli.
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NAN
  
Location: rochester NY
bathroom expert
| | | Re: Hospital of Collapsing Breezeways
<Reply # 7 on 5/30/2007 4:15 PM >
| | | | I think they all look pretty nice but I like 5 the best
Through the darkness of future's past
The magician longs to see
Once chants out between two worlds Fire, walk with me |
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DevilC
Location: Washington, District of Corruption
Gender: Male
I serve as a blank screen on which people of vastly different political stripes project their views.
| | | Re: Hospital of Collapsing Breezeways
<Reply # 8 on 5/31/2007 2:15 AM >
| | | | Very nice madame.
Your photos look like they were taken by someone with a degree in fine arts.
Oh wait. . . . . .
I shall go with the crowd and vote #5.
Science flies you to the Moon. Religion flies you into tall buildings. |
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junquehunter
Location: Columbia SC
Gender: Female
| | | Re: Hospital of Collapsing Breezeways
<Reply # 9 on 5/31/2007 2:05 PM >
| | | | I really think 7 is the strongest compositionally, a slight crop of the top to deemphasize the negative space that really doesn't lend any additional interest to the image itself perhaps. It's jam packed with leading lines, the color and texture are pleasing, and the play of light is mucho nice too. Nice job, but to me, most look a bit soft, and when there is so much texture, it's one of the rare instances I personally think sharpness is critical.
my 2 cents, and that's about all it's worth too chica.....
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