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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > laundry please critique (Viewed 509 times)
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laundry please critique
< on 3/1/2007 3:48 AM >
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some pictures for your enjoyment tell me what you think of them.
1 i have a way better angle but some of it is out of focus.

2 anyone like reading

3 old stapler

4 i have no idea what this is but it intrigued me

5 dirty

6 crappy stairs


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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 1 on 3/1/2007 4:30 AM >
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Try to work on your focousing and exposure levels.

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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 2 on 3/1/2007 6:07 AM >
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2 and 5 are the best of the set.

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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 3 on 3/1/2007 7:00 AM >
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What camera did you use to take this set?

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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 4 on 3/2/2007 11:10 PM >
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Posted by Shai Hulud
What camera did you use to take this set?


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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 5 on 3/2/2007 11:47 PM >
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1 has either water or light glare. I would have got all of the chairs parts and the cooler in the picture.
2 I like the it. Maybe could have tried to get the bottom of the first books inside the frame.
3 Whole photo is blown out. try to add a bit of contrast in photoshop
4 again whole machine is not in frame but to much to look good without it.
5 I like the mood in this picture but the light glare kills it. Should have tried moving over to block out the bottom part of the window.
6 Hmm that side doesn't look worse than the side we went up. You should try out bracket and blending but again light glare.

I agree 2 and 5 are the best ones.

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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 6 on 3/2/2007 11:53 PM >
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I like 5, Dirty Laundromat, and the stapler is funny. Died in the line of duty?

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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 7 on 3/3/2007 12:11 AM >
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You should adjust the level & contrast on your pictures, they'll look better! ;)

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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 8 on 3/3/2007 4:20 AM >
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#5 is good but it feels like more could have been done with the subject, especially with the great colors. The left part of it probably shouldn't have as much part in the photo.

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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 9 on 3/3/2007 9:27 AM >
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Posted by Blend

5 I like the mood in this picture but the light glare kills it. Should have tried moving over to block out the bottom part of the window.



5 is my favourite and I think the light glare/flare works. It has a nice glow to it. Like it would flare on film. You will find people's tastes vary quite a bit when it comes to slightly blowing out the highlights.

Rebel XT eh? were these shot on the 18-55mm kit lens? I am still on that lens and not to thrilled with the sharpness.

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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 10 on 3/3/2007 6:44 PM >
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Posted by inviolate_light


Rebel XT eh? were these shot on the 18-55mm kit lens? I am still on that lens and not to thrilled with the sharpness.


yea it does you figure for close to a grand, canon might throw a better lens on it, those cheap jerks!


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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 11 on 3/3/2007 6:48 PM >
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Posted by Blend


2 I like the it. Maybe could have tried to get the bottom of the first books inside the frame.




remember the books were under a table, i was crawling on the floor, and on the bottom and the right side were poles frozen to the ground, i was trying not to let them in the shot, were going back soon anyway ill try it again

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Re: laundry please critique
<Reply # 12 on 3/5/2007 1:56 AM >
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awesome set man i wish i could get up there next time with you guys.

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