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 JGullotti
Gender: Male
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< on 1/18/2007 5:59 PM >
|  | | | I'm new to the whole UE thing and would like some serious criticism on this stuff...
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IrIsHmOm
Location: San Joaquin Valley, CA
Gender: Female
I'll kill your face...
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<Reply # 1 on 1/18/2007 6:15 PM >
| | | | I'm pretty new too but here goes...
1) I like the colors.. composition isn't very captivating though.. maybe get the chair closer and from another angle.
2) straighten it a little and it'll be bad-ass.. I like the vines!
3) NICE
4) Love the fact that whoever wrote these can't spell "basket". Good subject.
5) A little over-saturated, but nice composition.
6) VERY nice landscape
7) My fave out of all of them! Very good!
I think you're off to a great start!! ^_~
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Glass
      
Location: Chicago
as one does
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<Reply # 2 on 1/18/2007 6:27 PM >
| | | | I recommend you get a photobucket account versus using the UER hosting... the server takes out a lot of image quality.
1) Cool. Good textures.
2) My favorite. Watch your highlights.
3) Neat and abstract, but I'd like more DoF next time.
4) Boring.
5) Cool. My third most favorite.
6) Boring.
7) Very good.
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desmet
When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro.
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<Reply # 3 on 1/18/2007 6:52 PM >
| | | | It's always interesting to see what other people got from a trip. I'm not that thrilled with the stuff I got. You spotted a lot of detail that I just glossed over...I have to work on that.
I agree with glass as far as not hosting them on UER...you should just host them on your site.
1 - I like the lighting but I think you need a stronger subject.
2 - I think you should have either shot this either straight up or with more tilt...the angle seems a little unintentional. Otherwise great shot. I love the red berries in there.
3 - Nice. I like this, though I would have shot it a little more straight on and left some off the left side and gotten a little more on the right.
4 - Good. Love the color and texture.
5 - Like the subject and the colors, composition is a little blah.
6 - Not bad. I might do curves on this to make the dark stuff a little darker. It needs a little more drama.
7 - Good, I like this one a lot. I might have cropped that little peek of the next row out of the right side though.
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Glass
Location: Chicago
as one does
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<Reply # 4 on 1/18/2007 6:55 PM >
| | | | Posted by desmet
It needs a little more drama.
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But... it's already hosted on UER.
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desmet
When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro.
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<Reply # 5 on 1/18/2007 7:05 PM >
| | | | Posted by Glass
But... it's already hosted on UER.
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/rimshot 
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paragonUE
Location: upstate new york
Gender: Male
"I hope you have hobo stab insurance"
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<Reply # 6 on 1/19/2007 2:58 AM >
|  | | | ok, the last one, all i have to say is,.......ooooo fancy cocktail peanuts,,,,, very nice pics, i like em alot
little known fact, if you shake the sprinkles at the bottom of a doughnut bag while exploring, youll actually be cought by cops faster |
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Captain Hook
Location: philadelphia
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 7 on 1/19/2007 9:28 PM >
| | | | 4 is really cool i love the black fade.
avast ye matties there is a squall aloof. Brace the jib and batten down the hatches! yarrrrr!!! |
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bobby18
Location: gardner ma
Gender: Female
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<Reply # 8 on 2/12/2007 4:17 AM >
| | | | i like 1 and 7.
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old-fangled
Too pooped to pop.
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<Reply # 9 on 2/12/2007 4:28 AM >
| | | | nice job...i'm totally into them. you got a good eye.
ummm...if number 7 is btown...i'd recomend not picking up any cans near the back projection room...i peed in one of them (i had to go and people were roaming around everywhere!)
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182 lbs of sad
Location: in the gym training my ass off!
Gender: Male
| | Re: Critiques Please...
<Reply # 10 on 2/14/2007 1:40 PM >
| | | | 1 i would love this pic if you put more focus on the chair instead of the whole room
2 i like the colors, but i do agree the angle is off
3 i like this one
4-5 there ok not much too them
6. the best i think
7 nice work i like the lighting
Fight like a man
Bleed like a man
Die like a man |
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crash
Location: White Plains, NY
Gender: Female
| | | | Re: Critiques Please...
<Reply # 11 on 2/15/2007 2:24 AM >
| | | | 4 and 7 are my favorites.
Beautiful black and white
the color ins 4 is great. Nice stuff 
I'm not crazy about the second image, I think there's too much focus on the wire/branch
FLICKR: http://www.flickr..../rockmycameraphoto |
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The Found Artists
Location: NYC
Gender: Male
Cassandra E. in wheelchair - taken by Matty B.
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<Reply # 12 on 2/15/2007 2:49 AM >
| | | | I am pretty sure that it was myself (Matty B.) and my girlfriend (Cassandra E.) who moved that chair and pulled down the screen in your first photo. I haven't edited that particular piece yet - but it was a cool shot, none the less.
You have a good eye for the abstract and I think you should keep running with that. Your close up and out of context photos are quite interesting and that's the stuff that goes unnoticed by many...
Model based urban exploration photography and Surreal Portraits by Matty B. and featuring the amazing and talented Cassandra E. |
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tait
Location: toronto
Gender: Male
meow
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<Reply # 13 on 2/15/2007 3:52 AM >
| | | | not much to say, i like them all. a+ on the editing. my only thought is that number 2 can't really hang with the rest of them.
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The Found Artists
Location: NYC
Gender: Male
Cassandra E. in wheelchair - taken by Matty B.
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<Reply # 14 on 2/15/2007 4:01 AM >
| | | | Same location:
Used natural light...
Taken with polaroid medium format camera
Model: Cassandra E.
Photographer: Matty B.
Taken at the school for the feeble minded.
Model based urban exploration photography and Surreal Portraits by Matty B. and featuring the amazing and talented Cassandra E. |
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_liss_
Location: Hudson Valley,NY
Gender: Female
| | | Re: Critiques Please...
<Reply # 15 on 2/15/2007 6:14 AM >
| | | | Number three is a great photo.I would love to see that as a black and white print.It would give it a whole nother look.
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imprezawrxsti
Location: Portland, OR
Gender: Male
nothing is true; everything is permitted
| | | Re: Critiques Please...
<Reply # 16 on 2/15/2007 7:09 AM >
| | | | Gulotti's set:
#4 is killer. Was the vignetting done in post or is that from the camera?
Harrison's set:
#3. I think you have some really good ideas, but none of those pictures really did it for me. I couldn't tell you why, it's just a feeling.
do you know how to waltz? |
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