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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > another one for all you beautiful people (Viewed 579 times)
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another one for all you beautiful people
< on 1/13/2007 1:49 AM >
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piss all over it.



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Re: another one for all you beautiful people
<Reply # 1 on 1/13/2007 1:50 AM >
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I'm scared of tight spaces, so I really don't like the way the funnel is positioned. BUT.. it was really nice texture and color.

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Re: another one for all you beautiful people
<Reply # 2 on 1/13/2007 5:12 AM >
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Love the shot and composition. I feel my eye gets a little lost on the left side of the structure because the lighting is minimal. The shot is really great in all aspects though. GJ!

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Re: another one for all you beautiful people
<Reply # 3 on 1/13/2007 5:18 AM >
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Posted by argonian
piss all over it.
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Re: another one for all you beautiful people
<Reply # 4 on 1/13/2007 1:22 PM >
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It's a nice picture

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Re: another one for all you beautiful people
<Reply # 5 on 1/13/2007 9:42 PM >
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You're dangerously close to visually breaking the image perfectly horizontally through the center- I'd either have cropped up or down a little bit more to split the space into thirds. Other than that, it's not bad. Interesting structure.

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Re: another one for all you beautiful people
<Reply # 6 on 1/14/2007 12:31 AM >
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Fuck that, horizontal centering works for the shot. Rule of thirds is a guideline...

I really like this and it does give a sense of crushing down. I might have actually included a little less on the bottom to make it feel even more claustrophobic, but it's obvious why you shot it the way you did. I might try and tease a little more shadow detail out on the top left.

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Re: another one for all you beautiful people
<Reply # 7 on 1/14/2007 12:56 AM >
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the colors came out nice.
sorry, i don't have any criticism for this one.
my red wine has kicked in, i guess...

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Re: another one for all you beautiful people
<Reply # 8 on 1/15/2007 2:54 PM >
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Posted by DevilC

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It seems to me that White Rabbit has been a bad influence on you. You might want to consider enrolling at a finishing school.

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Re: another one for all you beautiful people
<Reply # 9 on 1/15/2007 3:28 PM >
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Thanks for your comments everyone. It is helpful and fascinating to hear what others are thinking. Again, thanks a bunch!

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Re: another one for all you beautiful people
<Reply # 10 on 2/26/2007 4:43 PM >
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it has nice colors, texture, and comp. i like it

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