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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Picture from early fall (Viewed 478 times)
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Picture from early fall
< on 1/4/2007 5:53 PM >
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I had forgotten about this pic, but it's one that I did like. I took it back in the beginning of fall and had just come across it again on one of my disks. Actually I think I had posted it on a totally different thread. Now I know this isn't an abandoned building, but any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks.




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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 1 on 1/6/2007 8:16 PM >
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Halfway up on the right side, it looks like there is a guy standing there going pee.

Other than that, in my opinion it is a nice shot.

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 2 on 1/6/2007 11:14 PM >
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Did you use a polarizer? A polarizer would darken that blue sky/ad contrast to the clouds, get rid of the glare on the water, and punch up the colors in the trees. If you did use one ... uh, well, pretty picture.

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 3 on 1/7/2007 9:32 PM >
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Posted by PsychoNJ
Halfway up on the right side, it looks like there is a guy standing there going pee.

Other than that, in my opinion it is a nice shot.

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how did you notice the guy peeing? You must have really good eyes.

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 4 on 1/8/2007 5:41 PM >
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Post by Explorer_H

Did you use a polarizer? A polarizer would darken that blue sky/ad contrast to the clouds, get rid of the glare on the water, and punch up the colors in the trees. If you did use one ... uh, well, pretty picture.


I didn't use anything.

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 5 on 1/8/2007 11:16 PM >
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Posted by Bones


how did you notice the guy peeing? You must have really good eyes.


It's pretty friggin' obvious. That's like how some people thought "Where's Waldo" was a challenge.

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 6 on 1/9/2007 2:42 AM >
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Posted by Bones


how did you notice the guy peeing? You must have really good eyes.


I used my special "look for the guy peeing" glasses!

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 7 on 1/9/2007 7:00 AM >
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I love this.. looks like a freakin postcard!! the peeing man IS a nice touch i think...

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 8 on 1/9/2007 8:05 AM >
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Now this is a Postcard..... I'm Serious.. I have them displayed in a few of the local Grocery & Convenient stores



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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 9 on 1/9/2007 9:51 AM >
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The 1st picture posted has to be one of the worst ever!

1. I thought this was a UE forum?

2. Nasty digital flatness, looks like it may have been sharpened too much.

3. Too little contrast

4. Too little saturation

5. composition seems a little awkward.

6. Crop out the bottom left, looks like a finger or something.

Must try harder! lol

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 10 on 1/9/2007 4:41 PM >
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Post by stoop_master

The 1st picture posted has to be one of the worst ever!

1. I thought this was a UE forum?

2. Nasty digital flatness, looks like it may have been sharpened too much.

3. Too little contrast

4. Too little saturation

5. composition seems a little awkward.

6. Crop out the bottom left, looks like a finger or something.

Must try harder! lol


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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 11 on 1/9/2007 10:21 PM >
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I have a problem with this picture, not to bash, im not intending to but It doesn't really catch my attention. Like stoop said, its really flat and a little boring. you need a real point of focus in it, and it is some thing that is is seriously lacking. I say go back and try it over and redo the way you shoot things a little bit and you would end up with a stronger photograph.

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 12 on 1/10/2007 12:06 AM >
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Agreeing with what people are saying, my little two cents would be like what Explorer said. Using a polarizer. I still need to get one of my new camera. They are lovely to have when it’s a bright day and to darken out the sky and cut out the light. And I would also suggest to bracket the shot, I don't know if it will do much to it but I just might be worth it.

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 13 on 1/10/2007 1:17 AM >
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Hey Wenn, must say I think you have something pretty good there. I don't have the vocabulary to say why I like it, just do.

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 14 on 1/10/2007 8:25 PM >
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Posted by stoop_master
2. Nasty digital flatness, looks like it may have been sharpened too much.

3. Too little contrast

4. Too little saturation


I think those three things taken together make for an interesting photo. It looks kind of like a painting to me, which is pretty cool. I'd crop the weeds out of the bottom and the ugly looking branch out of the top right, though.

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 15 on 1/13/2007 4:34 AM >
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i think the photo would look a lot better with some photoshop lens flare and a neat watermark.

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Re: Picture from early fall
<Reply # 16 on 2/1/2007 2:07 AM >
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2 things...1-it does kinda look like there is a guy taking a piss in picture and 2-it would be a kick ass picture if there was a massive old power plant/hospital/jail/...shack... in the backround.

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