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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > P-Funk and a staircase (Viewed 179 times)
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P-Funk and a staircase
< on 12/29/2006 11:06 PM >
Posted on Forum: Infiltration Forums
 
alright, just got a new digital camera..rip me up..I guess

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Re: P-Funk and a staircase
<Reply # 1 on 12/29/2006 11:25 PM >
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1st one is what you get when the p&s cant decide whether to focus on the chicken wire or the building, in any case its boring without any aesthetic appeal

2nd one is kinda good, lots of things you could do to make it better though

3rd why not wait till earlier or later that sun blasting thru the center is horrific the room is cool but you couldve picked a better angle/comp

4th is easily going to be the fav I predict, good subject and color and texture but I wouldve backed off and shot horizontal or just got one window or something, shaving both windows off like that and the tilt is really ruining your effort here

5th another potentially cool subject/shot blown by bad angle and composition, also, its leaning, either go full wacko 45 degree tilt or level up


my opinions your mileage may vary



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Re: P-Funk and a staircase
<Reply # 2 on 12/30/2006 2:00 AM >
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awesome. I appreciate that. All but the wire and window shot were taken on the run. Flew down nine flights of stairs with the fear of God in us,that on the roof were some serious thugs hiding out. The second we heard the roof exit creak open, we took off. So, everything else was shot on the run.

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Re: P-Funk and a staircase
<Reply # 3 on 12/30/2006 2:23 AM >
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I would go back and take lots of shots in that room from #4. I think a better shot of that same corner or one or both of those windows might have real potential. Maybe try some of 2Xplorations suggestions there. Nothing really catches my interest about the other shots at all.



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Re: P-Funk and a staircase
<Reply # 4 on 12/30/2006 3:44 AM >
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Posted by darth_operator
everything else was shot on the run.


and thats Ok too

most of the u.e. photos I take are taken rather quickly while watching over my shoulder, trying to stay out from in front of windows or off the skyline and listening for those doors creaking

sometimes, even if my tripod is slung on my shoulder I still shoot, with, a flash gun !

slow down set up your shot more carefully then shoot it several more times from slightly different exposures distances and angles til you get what you like its hard to compose when youre all spooky and on the alert at least it is for me



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