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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Random Abandons (Viewed 205 times) Wenn  Location: Pennsylvania Gender: Female  |  |  Random Abandons < on 12/28/2006 7:19 PM >   Here are a few more shots from the past few days of roaming 1. Burnt door in my favorite abandoned stone house. 2. Old car in Centralia 3. Second story fireplace from stone house 4. Chair to rest in next to fireplace. 5. Burnt wall in stone house. Teens torched it while it was in the process of being remodeled. 6. Headstone from local boneyard. Shai Hulud  Location: Evansville IN Gender: Male Shai, Team Phantom  |  Re: Random Abandons <Reply # 1 on 12/29/2006 2:51 AM >   The last of these is the only one I can say I like. The colors on the others are a bit dull and your composition is sometimes lacking. For example, in number five, the shot would be more interesting if you focused on one particular subject and left out the rest. My choice would be the window, because it's the most interesting. In number 2, your composition is good. It would probably be best to show all of the tires at the bottom, but you could also leave them out. I do really enjoy the "No Trespassing" sign in the car. Your composition in 3 is good because it focuses only on the fireplace. Six would have looked more appealing if the subject headstone had been finished. I'd suggest taking a few steps back and showing the whole thing, base included. Other than that, 6 is a great picture. The tree behind the headstone really fills in the shot, and the road on the left shows more dimension of the cemetery itself. I apologize in advance if I offended you. The critiques are only for the pictures. With a little work, these could really improve. Keep it up! Me: Why is there snow on her car? ... Wait a minute, that isn't snow at all! MutantMandias: Nothin' gets past you, man. Nothin'. -TN Waltz n 'Splore Volume 2 Wenn  Location: Pennsylvania Gender: Female  |  |  Re: Random Abandons <Reply # 2 on 12/30/2006 4:13 PM >   No, you didn't offend me. I appreciate the input. Thanks! UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Random Abandons (Viewed 205 times) All content and images copyright © 2002-2024 UER.CA and respective creators. Graphical Design by Crossfire. To contact webmaster, or click to email with problems or other questions about this site: UER CONTACT View Terms of Service | View Privacy Policy | Server colocation provided by Beanfield This page was generated for you in 78 milliseconds. Since June 23, 2002, a total of 739615530 pages have been generated.