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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Windows (Viewed 244 times)
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< on 12/11/2006 4:17 AM >
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Tear me a new one its ok....

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Re: Windows
<Reply # 1 on 12/11/2006 2:21 PM >
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THe last one is the best out of the three. Next time I would suggest coming in a little closer to the window and not having so much black around the outside. I think it kind of takes away from it. The first picture has some potential. Like maybe what I would have done was get up a little closer and shoot the broken glass. And just brighten it up a bit. Not crazy overall about the second one. I just dont think that the background has anything very interesting to it.

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Re: Windows
<Reply # 2 on 12/11/2006 4:35 PM >
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I like the concept of all three..
1)I think if you're going to show inside at all, let us see what's there. might add some interesting texture to the picture. And it's a little grainy. Probably not the camera, but however you compressed it.. Mine do that sometimes too..

2)Nothing really catches my eye about it...

3) I like this one. I've been told that the sun is not a good idea, but I like it personally. It adds character, and the colors are very nice here as well, even when they're kind of muted. Closer to the window would have fucused more on the tree which might make it a better composition..

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Re: Windows
<Reply # 3 on 12/11/2006 5:31 PM >
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I love doing window shots..

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Re: Windows
<Reply # 4 on 12/12/2006 2:51 AM >
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Thanks guys I appreciate the ideas

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Re: Windows
<Reply # 5 on 12/12/2006 3:06 AM >
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very nice. I like how the light shines in in photo 3. keep up the good work.


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Re: Windows
<Reply # 6 on 12/12/2006 3:30 PM >
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Personally, I'd correct the perspective and tilt, and move in closer so the window occupies more of the picture, and there is less of a black border.

I do like #3 more than #1 and #2 though.

Keep it up.

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Re: Windows
<Reply # 7 on 12/13/2006 10:25 PM >
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2 and 1 are awsome i just wish that number 1 wasnt tilted

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