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 Wenn
   
Location: Pennsylvania
Gender: Female
 |  |  | Critique please...
< on 11/28/2006 7:54 PM >
|  | | | Could you please critique? Thank you.
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PunkUE
 
Location: Attleboro
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 1 on 11/28/2006 7:57 PM >
| | | | Number 2 is nice, but I would have personally taken a few steps back.
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femaledragonx
  
Location: Detroit & Everywhere Else I can dream up to go to
The singularity is near
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<Reply # 2 on 11/28/2006 8:17 PM >
| | | | yes, #2 is very nice. a slightly different framing would have been even better, but it looks nice the way it is as well. very rich colors and textures.
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Bluntanamo Bay
Location: NC
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Critique please...
<Reply # 3 on 11/28/2006 10:18 PM >
| | | | 1. Good shot, and it captures the loneliness of abandonment. If you can go back, try getting down closer to the level of the pot and then moving back a little to get more in the frame. This will isolate it more and reinforce the emphasis of it as the subject matter.
2. Very nice shot. Good colors too.
3. Something about the framing makes me uneasy, but it's still solid. Don't forget to really move around your subject to get more unusual angles. Try taking a knee and looking up at it.
I am personally not a fan of the color effects in 1 and 3 (the name of it escapes me for some reason.) In some instances it works well to antique your photo, but I don't think it's working here.
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Wenn
Location: Pennsylvania
Gender: Female
| | | Re: Critique please...
<Reply # 4 on 11/29/2006 4:53 PM >
| | | | Here's a shot in color (without the sepia)...
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yota94
Location: AEQUITS.VERITAS. CALI.
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 5 on 11/30/2006 6:39 AM >
| | | | Posted by Wenn
Here's a shot in color (without the sepia)...
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i like this better....and i agree with everyone that #2 is AWSOME
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hedd
Location: Ottawa, ON, CA
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Critique please...
<Reply # 6 on 12/1/2006 9:03 PM >
| | | | Look at a histogram of #s 1 and 3 and you'll immediately see what's missing.
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tippa
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
boner jamz
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<Reply # 7 on 12/1/2006 9:23 PM >
| | | | focus. might have just been the sepcrapia. other than that they look pretty good.
[last edit 12/1/2006 9:24 PM by tippa - edited 1 times]
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desmet
When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro.
| | | | Re: Critique please...
<Reply # 8 on 12/2/2006 2:27 AM >
| | | | 1 - Kind of boring, but you should crop this 8x10 to get rid of some of the height. If possible at 8x10 crop it to where the wall will meet the corner.
2 - Good, though I would rather see this landscape and a little closer in. The top is great but the middle and bottom aren't really interesting.
3 - You're not totally off with your composition, but I would like to see this farther back so that the edge of the picture was right at the edge of both machines.
1 and 3 need curves/levels...not enough contrast and the blacks aren't black. The sepia looks bad. I like sepia, but however you did the sepia didn't work out well...try another method of toning it.
[last edit 12/2/2006 2:28 AM by desmet - edited 1 times]
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