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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > First time - some Buffalo Central Terminal shots... (Viewed 318 times)
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First time - some Buffalo Central Terminal shots...
< on 11/23/2006 6:16 PM >
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Hey guys, tell me what you think/where I went wrong...

1) http://i48.photobu...bat10/IMG_4377.jpg
2) http://i48.photobu...bat10/IMG_4387.jpg
3) http://i48.photobu...bat10/IMG_4395.jpg
4) http://i48.photobu...0/IMG_4349copy.jpg


Thanks!


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Re: First time - some Buffalo Central Terminal shots...
<Reply # 1 on 11/24/2006 10:26 PM >
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whoaaaa fisheye doood

the only imput i would put in is that the first one probably would look a million times cooler at the front of the station.

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Re: First time - some Buffalo Central Terminal shots...
<Reply # 2 on 11/30/2006 1:24 AM >
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Posted by Jono!
Hey guys, tell me what you think/where I went wrong...

1) http://i48.photobu...bat10/IMG_4377.jpg
2) http://i48.photobu...bat10/IMG_4387.jpg
3) http://i48.photobu...bat10/IMG_4395.jpg
4) http://i48.photobu...0/IMG_4349copy.jpg


Thanks!


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Re: First time - some Buffalo Central Terminal shots...
<Reply # 3 on 12/1/2006 9:02 PM >
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#1 is a bit of a lost cause because a) it's blurring and b) it wouldn't be that exciting anyways. Don't like the fisheye either.

#2 is pretty decent.. I would have taken it portrait-oriented instead, and it's still got some weird blurring issues around the peripheral (intentional or no?) but it's got potential.

#3 is not bad either, although the dark shadow in the centre is distracting... Photoshop that puppy!

#4 I don't like at all.

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Re: First time - some Buffalo Central Terminal shots...
<Reply # 4 on 12/1/2006 9:20 PM >
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Generally speaking, I'm not a fan of the fish eye. That aside:

#1: Your horizon isn't level. I like the contrasty image, though.
#2: What's that white speck at the top? The corner blurs are a function of the lens, and not much you can do about that (a reason to use another lens). A different lens, this would be a good photo.
#3: Only complaint is the corner softness from the lens. Otherwise it is a cool shot.
#4: Undecided. Its "flaws" appear intentional in the post-processing, so they aren't flaws. I'm leaning towards "like it".

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Re: First time - some Buffalo Central Terminal shots...
<Reply # 5 on 12/4/2006 5:23 AM >
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Posted by Jono!
2) http://i48.photobu...bat10/IMG_4387.jpg
3) http://i48.photobu...bat10/IMG_4395.jpg



I like these two, the fisheye is terrible to use head on with a building, but I understand that you might not have something else, or may like to experiment.
Keep trying everything until u find what you like.




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Re: First time - some Buffalo Central Terminal shots...
<Reply # 6 on 12/4/2006 5:30 AM >
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1... I think you have a definite 'focus issue' check your af or check for a diopter for your viewfinder.

2,3 .. are okay, however maybe a little on the underexposed side..

4.. its a personal thing, to me this looks more like a magazine cover than a photograph

ue.. it ain't what it usta be...
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Re: First time - some Buffalo Central Terminal shots...
<Reply # 7 on 12/4/2006 7:28 PM >
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Thanks, guys! Allow me to explain the fisheye issue: I shoot with a Canon 300D digital rebel, but the fisheye is one of those off-ebay bayonette-mount cheap ones, just for effects...the silly lens reduces the quality of shot to the camera my cell phone has.


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Re: First time - some Buffalo Central Terminal shots...
<Reply # 8 on 12/4/2006 9:18 PM >
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The effect is really weak. More sharpness, less contrast!
[last edit 12/4/2006 9:18 PM by Hi/Po - edited 1 times]

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