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 turkey
 
Gender: Male
 |  | New, different...good??
< on 10/29/2006 7:38 PM >
|  | | | Here's a selection of 6 photographs which I thought were quite good, however I would like some tips on what others would have done differently...
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turk ;)
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argonian
 
Location: Toronto, ON
Gender: Female
"Now with added cats!"
| | Re: New, different...good??
<Reply # 1 on 10/29/2006 8:47 PM >
| | | | 1. I would have the first card in focus. I have the urge to read, but it is hard to do as the first card is the only card I can see all of.
2. In this case I can't read anything, while I feel that is what I am supposed to be doing.
4. Again I am frustrated by not being able to read the card. I wonder what is being authenticated, but it is not a good wonder.
3. I think this is my favourite. To be picky, I wish the lighting on the mic was more even. The dark is too dark, the light to light. Maybe if you came at it from the other side, though I assume you wanted the grate and/or it would have made things difficult to shoot.
Que pasa, baby? |
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turkey
Gender: Male
| | Re: New, different...good??
<Reply # 2 on 10/29/2006 10:14 PM >
| | | | cheers mate, much appreciated, yeah the mic shot was very hard one to get properly..I maybe should have given another angle a go...
cheers for the critique anyways..
turk ;)
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turkey
Gender: Male
| | Re: New, different...good??
<Reply # 3 on 10/29/2006 11:25 PM >
| | | | here's a different idea for one of the pictures...dunno if I like it or not...opinions???
turk ;)
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femaledragonx
  
Location: Detroit & Everywhere Else I can dream up to go to
The singularity is near
| | Re: New, different...good??
<Reply # 4 on 11/9/2006 5:26 PM >
| | | | turkey!
these are great. seems you have a natural skill for the closer up shots.
(p.s. i miss you lot. give dweeb huggies and kissies from me, and send me your postal address, i am sending over a package of presents for everyone if disco doesn't have enough room in her bag when we send her home in a few days)
other than some cropping differences or maybe smaller fstops to exaggerate the depth of field, i wouldn't change much about these shots. you are definitely making major improvements.
much love. i miss you lot!
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the_doctor
Location: Boston area
Gender: Male
It's probably dangerous
| |  | Re: New, different...good??
<Reply # 5 on 11/9/2006 5:47 PM >
| | | | I like the playing card one, but other than that the pics seem kind of lacking something, just like dull, keep shooting.
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Shai Hulud
 
Location: Evansville IN
Gender: Male
Shai, Team Phantom
| | Re: New, different...good??
<Reply # 6 on 11/10/2006 6:13 AM >
| | | | Number two is my favorite, far and away. It's not even the subject that's so great, although old documents are always cool. It's the lighting here that does it. The wall which the clipboards are hung on has a very rich color, and due to the way the papers have been manipulated, shadows are cast across both documents in random arrangements, and I really love the effect. The rest didn't have a very strong grip for me.
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Volitant
Location: Salt Lake City
Gender: Male
Half Member
| |  | Re: New, different...good??
<Reply # 7 on 11/10/2006 7:42 PM >
|  | | | I'd like to see some "rule of thirds" layout on number 2 and maybe more contrast?
So not really a re-shoot, just a photoshop touchup i guess.
I like # 2 a lot though, as well as your first version of the cards one...
"The human mind is like a parachute. It only functions when it's open." |
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Volitant
Location: Salt Lake City
Gender: Male
Half Member
| | | Re: New, different...good??
<Reply # 8 on 11/10/2006 8:03 PM >
| | | | And now that I look at them again, I would like #6 a lot more if the focus was either on the window or the building outside, it seems like its not on either.
But maybe thats just the dirty window making it look that way.
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