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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Pain In My ASS (Viewed 1896 times)
LostInPa 


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Pain In My ASS
< on 8/29/2006 7:10 AM >
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What a great weekend I had... except for the 15 foot free fall onto my left ass cheek.
(I need a new camera! 5 megapixels isnt cutting it!)
Taken At 6 Different Hospitals
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I broke my ass for these! I hope you enjoyed 'em....

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 1 on 8/29/2006 12:20 PM >
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Great texture and tonal range in this series.

I'm very fond of the reflection in 9 and the texture in 13 and 15.

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 2 on 8/29/2006 1:58 PM >
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Oooh, a full critique:

1 nice perspective of the whole place
2 i don't understand the angle you're going for here, I don't think its even.
3 awesome picture, i think i've seen someone else with the same shot on here?
4 it seems like its stacked to the left
5 nice but i'm not sure where my eyes should be going
6 great use of natural light
7 i like the picture but i would remove the bottle next time, i find myself staring at it and it shouldn't be the focus of (or maybe even in) the picture
8 i like the framing by the window of the building you're in
9 nice reflection shot
10 again i like this shot a lot
11 gay pride iron lungs hahaha, great capture
12 great capture and use of natural light
13 again a nice use of natural light, but consider cropping the right
14 love the angle
15 i'm sure this was a difficult capture but i don't really like the angle
16 very nice natural light usage
17 i'm not sure what the intent of the crooked angle is on this but it shouts 'hey its 1995 and i'm going to sport flannel', i hope you have others of the morgue.
18 i like the angle here because it is framed by the beam that has the picture on it on the right
19 i like the intent of this but maybe have the line of the top of the photo follow the line on the left side of the roof next time?

overall i'd say this is a great set with lots of great textures. you've got a great eye for detail and i like how you've got some context of the building as a whole in the set

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 3 on 8/29/2006 2:36 PM >
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Ouch, sorry to hear about the flying lessons. You picked the right spot to land though. Nice pics, Thank you for sharing.

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 4 on 8/29/2006 5:06 PM >
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Nice set, at least one positive of the development of these places is you get a small window of time to visit with the window not boarded up!

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 5 on 8/29/2006 5:49 PM >
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Nice shots! I absolutely love the color and texture of 3, by far my favorite. The machinery in 5 is neat and the light quality in 16 is awesome as well. Very nice altogether.

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 6 on 8/29/2006 7:47 PM >
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Hey prometheus,thanks for the critique!
Here's some explanations. for #2, i didnt have my tripod. I couldn't get the one i was using to adjust. #7. you're right. i didn't even notice the bottle at the time. For #17, i'm not sure either. I only had time to take 2 shots inside the morgue.. I was being rushed...



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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 7 on 8/29/2006 7:56 PM >
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6 hospitals in one weekend?? wow. nice shots, good use of color.

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 8 on 8/30/2006 9:32 PM >
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They're all lovely, but I'm especially fond of #3. The colors and the contrast and the texture...fantastic.

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 9 on 8/31/2006 12:58 AM >
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great shots..is the mosquito painting still on the window in the childrens ward?
I liked that place (lameville) but i didnt like being chased by security..lol


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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 10 on 9/2/2006 2:26 AM >
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#3, 9, 13, 15, 18 - stunning. absolutely stunning.

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 11 on 9/2/2006 5:05 AM >
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These are all great. The colors are rich and your perspective makes each shot interesting. I have to say that number 3 is my favorite, simply because it's incredible, but great job on all the rest.

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 12 on 9/2/2006 7:55 AM >
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thanks for all the comments!
j/w... Why was this tread moved?

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 13 on 9/2/2006 8:00 AM >
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Nice pics, I love the reflection in #9, It took me a couple of secs to realize what it was. I also loved the Teletubbies birthing center!!

This species has amused itself to death!
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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 14 on 9/2/2006 5:04 PM >
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#17 kind of scares the crap out of me

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 15 on 9/2/2006 5:46 PM >
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Great shots! I like 13!

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 16 on 9/5/2006 3:22 PM >
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That thermometer shot is killer!! Love it.

I also really liked 9 and 18. 17 is too blurry for me to enjoy.

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 17 on 9/7/2006 4:09 PM >
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Ya nice shots love too see more!

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LostInPa 


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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 18 on 9/8/2006 8:20 AM >
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Post by whats left of the psych
Ya nice shots love too see more!


i posted most of my pics on my yahoo photo's page in my profile...

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Re: Pain In My ASS
<Reply # 19 on 9/12/2006 3:21 AM >
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4 and 14 are my favorites.

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