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 NAN
     
Location: rochester NY
bathroom expert
 |  |  | Can someone tell me what wrong with these pictures
< on 7/29/2006 3:39 PM >
|  | | | I posted these before but I am kind of wondering if there is something wrong with them. So. Here they are again. Critique away if you will.
1. It really was this color
2. Good bye Noho, taken just a few weeks before her death.
3. RIP
4. Peeling door..all gone.
5. Factory mess
6. Lockers, They are baskets the extend from chains that can be lowered and raised up into the ceiling.
7. Gurney with restraints
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9. Can't help it, it's a nice hallway!
10. Really old
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12.
13.Suction machine
14.
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16.Huh??
Through the darkness of future's past
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I am the Bear
 
Location: Seattle Wa
Gender: Male
| | Re: Can someone tell me what wrong with these pictures
<Reply # 1 on 7/29/2006 4:01 PM >
| | | | first off i'd like to say that #14 is my favorite of the set. and it wasnt hard to pick that one. it certainly stuck out. its so amazing.
it looks like you may have used flash on 2, and possibly 3. if you did, thats cool, but it doesn't make for aesthetically pleasing photographs.
#4 is splendid, but perhaps you could rotate it clockwise a bit. the vertical lines arent quite vertical.
#5 is a good job of creating a definite object for the eye to rest on, surrounded by a bunch of confusing debris. good eye, good thinking.
#7 and #8 may look better with a little saturation. try it.
#9 just seems flat and fuzzy, but yes, its a nice hallway.
#12 is better than #11 i think, just because of the vibrant colors.
#13 is another favorite. i dont know how to improve it...maybe a little darker? more contrast? it doesn't need anything really
#14 (my favorite) would also look sweet in BW.
#15 is pretty cute. that yellow one is starting to get washed out though.
#16 very pretty and sort of elegant. this one is a bit tilted though, like #4. rotate it clockwise a tad.
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NAN
Location: rochester NY
bathroom expert
| | | Re: Can someone tell me what wrong with these pictures
<Reply # 2 on 7/29/2006 4:05 PM >
| | | | Thanks for commenting. I didn't use a flash on any pictures. I try never to use a flash. It's just a long exposure
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turkey
Gender: Male
| | Re: Can someone tell me what wrong with these pictures
<Reply # 3 on 7/29/2006 7:13 PM >
| | | | pretty good set of pictures, would have liked them a bit darker though...dont like the overblown highlights..
turk ;)
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Gazoo
Location: Barrie, ON
| | | Re: Can someone tell me what wrong with these pictures
<Reply # 4 on 7/29/2006 8:51 PM >
| | | | Nice stuff, I prefer longer exposures over flash as well (better colours)
I want to die while asleep like my grandfather,
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NAN
Location: rochester NY
bathroom expert
| | | Re: Can someone tell me what wrong with these pictures
<Reply # 5 on 7/29/2006 9:03 PM >
| | | | thanks for the comments guys. I really don't use a flash though
Through the darkness of future's past
The magician longs to see
Once chants out between two worlds Fire, walk with me |
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Andy "Not Dice" Dice
Location: We can live in dumpsters if we have to, MA
Gender: Male
UE'ing is for pussies, bro.
| |  | | Re: Can someone tell me what wrong with these pictures
<Reply # 6 on 7/29/2006 9:39 PM >
| | | | It's good that you're getting down low instead of eye-level all the time.
If you're going to be doing longer exposures (more than a second), you may as well go all the way and close your aperture down to get the entire hallway in focus. It looks like you're using a wider aperture in shots 2 and 3 (though jpeg compression isn't helping the crispness at all, it could be not as unfocused as it looks).
6 is the strongest out of all of them. It has really nice movement. Nice subject-ground reversals. It's artschool good. It's unfortunate that there's a wall right behind that subject, because it draws your eye back into the space very nicely.
For the most part they're all well exposed and the thing to work on I think would be approach to composition. Try to make your shots have purpose?
I can't think of anything else right now!
Keep workin on it!
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cwestcivic5
Location: Michigan
Gender: Male
| | Re: Can someone tell me what wrong with these pictures
<Reply # 7 on 7/30/2006 3:14 AM >
| | | | Some of them (like 1 and 2) seem a little washed out. Try darkening them a bit then bumping the contrast up.
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the_doctor
Location: Boston area
Gender: Male
It's probably dangerous
| | | Re: Can someone tell me what wrong with these pictures
<Reply # 8 on 7/30/2006 5:32 AM >
| | | | metro isn't very photogenic, that is your problem.
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grassy
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Yeah, I'm MAX ACTION... So what?
| | Re: Can someone tell me what wrong with these pictures
<Reply # 9 on 7/30/2006 6:25 AM >
| | | | Posted by flamable221
metro isn't very photogenic, that is your problem.
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Hahaaa!
i have never taken a photograph in my life
exploring should be done at home, where it's safe |
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Andy "Not Dice" Dice
Location: We can live in dumpsters if we have to, MA
Gender: Male
UE'ing is for pussies, bro.
| | | | Re: Can someone tell me what wrong with these pictures
<Reply # 10 on 7/31/2006 3:06 AM >
| | | | Ehhhhh, it's more photogenic than Lakeville. There are like four interesting objects to photograph there and everybody has done so.
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